Dec. 31, 2024
I am planning travel tomorrow
I want to travel today,so I had planing a travel tomorrow when I eating breakfast.
I will go to Shenzhen tomorrow morning and arrive in Xiamen tomorrow night.
I would like to visit Gulangyu Island,Putuo Tempe and Xiamen university.
Although I don't have a plan about.what to eat,I'm already feeling happy now.
Tomorrowis new year,new experiences in the New Year.But I feel a little scared,because this my first travel,don't have friends with me,only me.
我今天突然很想去旅游，所以我早上计划了明天来一趟旅行。我明天早上去广东深圳玩一天，接着去厦门去旅行。我想去鼓浪屿，普陀寺还有厦门大学。
虽然我还没有想好吃什么，但是已经感觉到很开心。明天是元旦，新的一年，新的体验。不过我有点害怕，因为这是我第一次自己一个人出去旅行。
Today, I feel that I want to travel today,soon, so I had planingned a travel ip tomorrow when I was eating breakfast.
Tomorrow is the new year, new experiences in the New Year. But I feel a little scared, because this my first travel,ip, and I don't have friends with me, only me.
More natural: Tomorrow is the new year, and I'll have new experiences. But I feel a little scared because this is my first trip without any friends, only me!
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"A travel" is not really normal English because "travel" is not something you count. "A trip" is better. You can have a trip, two trips, three trips, but you can't have "two travels."
A good vocabulary word for this situation: solo trip
I hope you have a lot of fun!! I have a friend who lived in Xiamen for several years, and she loved it!
Jan. 1, 2025
Thank you!Happy new year!
I want to travel today, so I had planingned a travel ip for tomorrow when Iile I was eating breakfast.
Since you are traveling tomorrow, it would not make sense to say, "I want to travel today". Instead, remove "today" to imply that you want to travel in general. Use the past participle with "had", so "had planned". If you made these plans during your breakfast, you would say "while I was eating".
I would like to visit Gulangyu Island, Putuo Tempele, and Xiamen uUniversity.
Although I don't have a plan about. what to eat, but I'm already feeling happy nowexcited.
If you are happy about your upcoming trip, you are "excited" for it.
Tomorrow is nNew yYear,new experiences in the New Year.'s Day, which brings new experiences. But I feel a little scared, because this my first travel,ip that I don't have friends with me,only me I am by myself.
Dec. 31, 2024
Thank you for you teaching,but I don't know why is“trip”no is“travel”？
Dec. 31, 2024
"Travel" refers to the progress of moving from one location to another in a general way. Example: I love to travel to different countries. The word "trip", however, refers to a specific journey, or type of travel. It is used to describe the experience of going to a location. Example: Last year, I took a trip to Paris. You would not say "Last year, I took a travel to Paris". You could say "Last year, I traveled to Paris". Hope this helps!
Jan. 1, 2025
ok，I understand now,thank you!Happy new year!
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I am planning travel tomorrow |
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I want to travel today,so I had planing a travel tomorrow when I eating breakfast. I want to travel Since you are traveling tomorrow, it would not make sense to say, "I want to travel today". Instead, remove "today" to imply that you want to travel in general. Use the past participle with "had", so "had planned". If you made these plans during your breakfast, you would say "while I was eating". Today, I feel that I want to travel |
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I will go to Shenzhen tomorrow morning and arrive in Xiamen tomorrow night. |
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I would like to visit Gulangyu Island,Putuo Tempe and Xiamen university. I would like to visit Gulangyu Island, Putuo Temp |
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Although I don't have a plan about.what to eat,I'm already feeling happy now. Although I don't have a plan about If you are happy about your upcoming trip, you are "excited" for it. |
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Tomorrowis new year,new experiences in the New Year.But I feel a little scared,because this my first travel,don't have friends with me,only me. Tomorrow is Tomorrow is the new year, new experiences in the New Year. But I feel a little scared, because this my first tr More natural: Tomorrow is the new year, and I'll have new experiences. But I feel a little scared because this is my first trip without any friends, only me! |
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