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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 13, 2024

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I am Equally to Both STEM and Humanity

I am the kind of person equally with STEM and humanities. I clearly remember that my father, a chemistrical engineer, often suggested I to learn to be an engineer like him. However, it appears that I like history, although I also recognize carpentry, and electricity as hobbies of mine.

When learning about STEM, it's quite a challenge for me to have a deep understanding, even though a significant amount of time is consumed on it. History, on the other hand, also takes a lot of my spare time. In truth, I didn't find too much difference between the two areas, so I am inclined equal to both.

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I am Equally toInterested in Both STEM and the Humanityies

needs an additional word here-- you might also have meant "I am Equally Good at Both STEM and the Humanities"

I am the kind of person equally withgood at STEM and the humanities.

"equally" needs some kind of extra word here-- equally good, equally interested, etc

I clearly remember that my father, a chemistrical engineer, often suggested I to learn to be an engineer like him.

However, it appears that I like history, although I also recognize carpentry, and electricity asal work are hobbies of mine.

When learning about STEM, it's quite a challenge for me to have a deep understanding, even though I spend a significant amount of time is consumed on it.

this correction means "I spend a lot of time learning STEM." If you meant "it takes me a long time to understand STEM topics", then try this correction:
"even though a significant amount of time is consumed on it." -> "even if I spend a significant amount of time on it."

History, on the other hand, also takes a lot of my spare time.

"on the other hand" means "to the contrary" or "differently from what I have just said". You said in the previous sentence that STEM takes a long time, so it sounds a bit strange here.

Possible correction: "History also takes a lot of my spare time." "On the other hand, I enjoy spending my spare time learning history."

In truth, I didon't findsee too much difference between the two areas, so I am equally inclined equal to both.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections and helpful explanations!

I am Equally to Both STEM and Humanity


I am Equally toInterested in Both STEM and the Humanityies

needs an additional word here-- you might also have meant "I am Equally Good at Both STEM and the Humanities"

I am the kind of person equally with STEM and humanities.


I am the kind of person equally withgood at STEM and the humanities.

"equally" needs some kind of extra word here-- equally good, equally interested, etc

I clearly remember that my father, a chemistrical engineer, often suggested I to learn to be an engineer like him.


I clearly remember that my father, a chemistrical engineer, often suggested I to learn to be an engineer like him.

However, it appears that I like history, although I also recognize carpentry, and electricity as hobbies of mine.


However, it appears that I like history, although I also recognize carpentry, and electricity asal work are hobbies of mine.

When learning about STEM, it's quite a challenge for me to have a deep understanding, even though a significant amount of time is consumed on it.


When learning about STEM, it's quite a challenge for me to have a deep understanding, even though I spend a significant amount of time is consumed on it.

this correction means "I spend a lot of time learning STEM." If you meant "it takes me a long time to understand STEM topics", then try this correction: "even though a significant amount of time is consumed on it." -> "even if I spend a significant amount of time on it."

History, on the other hand, also takes a lot of my spare time.


History, on the other hand, also takes a lot of my spare time.

"on the other hand" means "to the contrary" or "differently from what I have just said". You said in the previous sentence that STEM takes a long time, so it sounds a bit strange here. Possible correction: "History also takes a lot of my spare time." "On the other hand, I enjoy spending my spare time learning history."

In truth, I didn't find too much difference between the two areas, so I am inclined equal to both.


In truth, I didon't findsee too much difference between the two areas, so I am equally inclined equal to both.

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