I am eager to improve my English skills

Hello,friendsI! am Futurejo in China with more than 10 years of exprience in English study.

"than" is used to compare things. Including amounts: (ex, "more than; less than).

"of" is used to

The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability is in very bad.are poor

"very bad" DOES work here, but "poor" works better

please would you like to give some sugguestions to improve my english skills.

I plan to post my my written passanges on the langcorreect platform and I hope my friends ion Langcorrect can help correct my writting.

I am eager to improve my English skills

We tend to say "skills" more often than skill, especially with languages because you have writing, listening, etc.

Hello, friends. I am Futurejo in China with more 10 years exprience . I am from China and I have been studying English studyfor 10 years.

Having experience in a field of study is a little weird. You have X years experience in a certain field or you have been studying something for X years.

AndI also I took the BEC higher test this year , only to get Level B2.

The test result manifestsindicated that my reading and listensing ability is inies are very bad.

you may have wanted to say "are in very bad condition". That would make more sense, but isn't a perfect fit for this sentence. Manifest doesn't fit and is also a word that isn't popularly used. Past tense and present tense both work; I just used past to show a different way of saying the same thing.

please wWould you like toplease give me some sugguestions tofor improveing my eEnglish skills.?

I am eager to watch naitive eEnglish films/movies without caption,s/subtitles, but it is very difficult for me ,and. I also I want to write good passage,s, but the results always make me frustrated.

Where I am from, although we understand "film" and "captions" in the context you provided, we generally prefer to use "movie" and "subtitles".

I plan to post my my written passanges on lLangcCorreect platform and I hope my friends ion LangcCorrect can help correct my writting.

I didn't change it, but calling people you don't know "friends" isn't a popular way of addressing people. I would say "the people/users/members".

AI appreciate it.

In writing we always use pronouns, but if you said this in conversation you would get away with it (but only for very short sentences!)

I am eager to improve my English skills

Hello,friendsI am Futurejo in China with. My name is Futurejo, and I am from China. I have more than 10 years experience studying English study.

AndI also I took the BEC higher test this year , only to get Level B2.

The test result manifestshows that my reading and listensing ability is inies are very bad.

please wWould you like to givplease give me some sugguestions on how to improve my eEnglish skills.?

I am eager to watch naitive eEnglish films without caption,s, but it is very difficult for me ,and. I also I want to write good passage,s, but the results always make me frustrated.

I plan to post my my written passanges on lLangcCorreect platform , and I hope to make friends in LangcCorrect that can help correct my writting.

AI appreciate it.