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pau_geff91

Feb. 7, 2025

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I am Aupair

Hi, I am Au pair since the 6 january, in the british family. That very cool, I keept three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina. They are very kind and cute. I am in this family for five month, i want to improve my english for watching a new job in the event communication. All my days is differents but generally the program of the day is wake up at 7am. After Breakfeast and dress up for school and kindy. I stay with Nina during the day, we walk, we play and Nina sleep and eat lot of. THe boy came back home at 4pm and after we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm. When the dinner time is finish the time for the shower and bedtime are coming.

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Hi, I am Ahave been an au pair since 6the 6 january, in the ba British family.

ThatIt is very cool, I keeptlook after three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina.

I am inhave stayed with this family for five month, is. I want to improve my eEnglish for watby searching for a new job in the events communication.

All my days isare differents but generally the programschedule of the day is wakebegins with waking up at 7am.

After Bbreakfeast and, I dress upthe children for school and kindyergarten.

In the UK we say nursery rather than kindergarten.

I stay with Nina during the day, w. We walk, we play and Nina sleeps and eats a lot of.

THhe boy caomes back home at 4pm and afterwards we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm.

When thOnce dinner time is finish theover, it is time for thea shower and bedtime are coming.

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I hope you're enjoying your time in the UK.

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Frenchgeek

March 6, 2025

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I can see from the other correction that maybe you meant that you want to improve your English in order to (with the goal to) get a job in events communication. In that case, the other correction for this sentence is better.

I am an Aupair

Hi, I amhave been an Au pair since the 6 jth of January, in the bfor a British family.

ThatIt's very cool, I keeptlook after three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina.

I am inwith this family for five months, i want to improve my english for watchingto get a new job in the event communication.

All my days isare differents but generally the program of the day is wake up at 7am.

After Breakfeast and dress up for school and kindy.?

I don't know what you meant by and kindy.

I stay with Nina during the day, we walk, we play and Nina sleeps and eat lot of.

THhe boy caomes back home at 4pm and after we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm.

When the dinner time is finished the time for the shower and bedtime are coming.

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Well done, I hope you are enjoying being in the UK!

I am Aupair


I am an Aupair

All my days is differents but generally the program of the day is wake up at 7am.


All my days isare differents but generally the program of the day is wake up at 7am.

All my days isare differents but generally the programschedule of the day is wakebegins with waking up at 7am.

After Breakfeast and dress up for school and kindy.


After Breakfeast and dress up for school and kindy.?

I don't know what you meant by and kindy.

After Bbreakfeast and, I dress upthe children for school and kindyergarten.

In the UK we say nursery rather than kindergarten.

I stay with Nina during the day, we walk, we play and Nina sleep and eat lot of.


I stay with Nina during the day, we walk, we play and Nina sleeps and eat lot of.

I stay with Nina during the day, w. We walk, we play and Nina sleeps and eats a lot of.

THe boy came back home at 4pm and after we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm.


THhe boy caomes back home at 4pm and after we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm.

THhe boy caomes back home at 4pm and afterwards we eating beetween 6pm and 6:30pm.

When the dinner time is finish the time for the shower and bedtime are coming.


When the dinner time is finished the time for the shower and bedtime are coming.

When thOnce dinner time is finish theover, it is time for thea shower and bedtime are coming.

Hi, I am Au pair since the 6 january, in the british family.


Hi, I amhave been an Au pair since the 6 jth of January, in the bfor a British family.

Hi, I am Ahave been an au pair since 6the 6 january, in the ba British family.

That very cool, I keept three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina.


ThatIt's very cool, I keeptlook after three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina.

ThatIt is very cool, I keeptlook after three childrens, the first is Leo, the second Marin and the last is a little baby Nina.

They are very kind and cute.


I am in this family for five month, i want to improve my english for watching a new job in the event communication.


I am inwith this family for five months, i want to improve my english for watchingto get a new job in the event communication.

I am inhave stayed with this family for five month, is. I want to improve my eEnglish for watby searching for a new job in the events communication.

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