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The Netherlands trip

I went to the Netherlands for three days.
The Netherlands is close from the contry I have lived, so I could go just for 1 hour
and 30 minutes, but my flight was canceled and it takes me one day to go to.
The second plane was delay and I stayed at the hotel that the airport had prepare for us.
I have been to the Netherlands airport when I went back to Japan, the flight at that time was also canceled and I stayed at the airport.
However, at this time, the hotel wasn't far from the airport and their work was so fast, so we were able to stay at the hotel without problem.
The next day, we went to Keukenhof Gardens. I saw so many different flowers and they were beautiful. Me and my little brother loved this place.
I also went to three museums , Van Gogh museum and more.
At Van Gogh museum, we saw many his self portrait, a sun flower, and the yellow house.
I learned about him befor I went to the museum, so I could see the works with some knowledge about him.
I saw the work, colled "Girl with a Pearl Earring" at other museum.
I loved this work and his other works than Mona Lisa.
I also studyed about Johannes Vermeer and his strenghts. I knew that his signature is on the black back ground at that work on the video, so I tried to check, and I only understood it said "M". I took the picture of that part.
I wanted to see the work, colled "Girl Reading a Letter at an Open Window" but I heard that it is in a museum in Italy, so I couldn't.
I saw "The Night Watch". It was so huge, that I couldn't see every part. it was checked or something was doing on it. This work was in a one room. I guess its size is not enough with a one of my house's wall.
I studyed about this work today. I wanted to search about it befor I saw the work.
Johannes Vermeer's work made me get interseted in art.
I went to Anne Frank's house and ate a apple pie. Actually, I prefer my mom's apple pie.
I bought three Miffi that the Netherlands limited.
I really enjoyed this trip.

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The Netherlands trip

I went to the Netherlands for three days.

However, at this time, the hotel wasn't far from the airport and their work was so fast, so we were able to stay at the hotel without problem.

The next day, we went to Keukenhof Gardens.

I saw so many different flowers and they were beautiful.

Me and my little brother loved this place.

I took the picture of that part.

I saw "The Night Watch".

It was so huge, that I couldn't see every part.

Actually, I prefer my mom's apple pie.

I really enjoyed this trip.

The Netherlands trip


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I went to the Netherlands for three days.


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The Netherlands is close from the contry I have lived, so I could go just for 1 hour


The Netherlands is close from theto a country I have lived in before, so I could go just for 1 hour The Netherlands is close to a country I have lived in before, so I could go just for 1 hour

Maybe "I would have been able to visit there for 1 hour and 30 minutes" if you were planning to visit this other country, but ended up not able to do it.

and 30 minutes, but my flight was canceled and it takes me one day to go to.


and 30 minutes, but my flight was canceled and it takes me one day to go toet there. and 30 minutes, but my flight was canceled and it takes one day to get there.

To get there --> to reach the place you want to go Hopefully this is what you meant, I wasn't 100% sure.

The second plane was delay and I stayed at the hotel that the airport had prepare for us.


The second plane was delay anded as well, so I stayed at the hotel that the airport had prepared for us. The second plane was delayed as well, so I stayed at the hotel that the airport had prepared for us.

As well as the first plane.

I have been to the Netherlands airport when I went back to Japan, the flight at that time was also canceled and I stayed at the airport.


I have been to the Netherlands airport when I wentanother time when I was on my way back to Japan, t. The flight at that time was also canceled andso I stayed at the airport then as well. I have been to the Netherlands airport another time when I was on my way back to Japan. The flight at that time was also canceled so I stayed at the airport then as well.

However, at this time, the hotel wasn't far from the airport and their work was so fast, so we were able to stay at the hotel without problem.


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The next day, we went to Keukenhof Gardens.


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I saw so many different flowers and they were beautiful.


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Me and my little brother loved this place.


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I also went to three museums , Van Gogh museum and more.


I also went to three museums , including the Van Gogh museum and more. I also went to three museums, including the Van Gogh museum.

Since there are only 3 things mentioned here, it's better to drop the "and more" and just give your 1 example. No need for a space before a comma, only after one.

At Van Gogh museum, we saw many his self portrait, a sun flower, and the yellow house.


At the Van Gogh museum, we saw many of his paintings: his self portrait, a sun flower, and the yellow house. At the Van Gogh museum, we saw many of his paintings: his self portrait, a sun flower, and the yellow house.

I learned about him befor I went to the museum, so I could see the works with some knowledge about him.


I learned about him before I went to the museum, so I could see the workpaintings with some knowledge about him. I learned about him before I went to the museum, so I could see the paintings with some knowledge about him.

I saw the work, colled "Girl with a Pearl Earring" at other museum.


I saw the work,a painting coalled "Girl with a Pearl Earring" at another museum. I saw a painting called "Girl with a Pearl Earring" at another museum.

I loved this work and his other works than Mona Lisa.


I loved this workpiece, and histhe other works, other than Mona Lisa. I loved this piece, and the other works, other than Mona Lisa.

If you are excluding something from a category like this, you would use "other than". Eg. I like all ice cream flavours, other than strawberry. Van Gogh didn't paint Mona Lisa, so "his" other works doesn't work here. Piece to avoid repetition of the word "work" too many times. Painting would also work. The word "work" is usually only used when talking academically about the artist's life and work, but not really when casually talking about individual paintings or pieces of art.

I also studyed about Johannes Vermeer and his strenghts.


I also studyied about Johannes Vermeer and his strenghths. I also studied about Johannes Vermeer and his strengths.

I knew that his signature is on the black back ground at that work on the video, so I tried to check, and I only understood it said "M".


I knew that his signature is on the black back ground aton that work on the videopiece, so I tried to check, and I only understood it said "M". I knew that his signature is on the black background on that piece, so I tried to check, and I only understood it said "M".

What video? Better to just omit this part as its a bit unclear. Background is one word.

I took the picture of that part.


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I wanted to see the work, colled "Girl Reading a Letter at an Open Window" but I heard that it is in a museum in Italy, so I couldn't.


I wanted to see the work,a painting coalled "Girl Reading a Letter at an Open Window" but I heard that it is in a museum in Italy, so I couldn't. I wanted to see a painting called "Girl Reading a Letter at an Open Window" but I heard that it is in a museum in Italy, so I couldn't.

I saw "The Night Watch".


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It was so huge, that I couldn't see every part.


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it was checked or something was doing on it.


iIt was checked or something was doing on it. It was checked or something was doing on it.

Not sure what you mean by "checked" here?

This work was in a one room.


This workpiece was in a one room. This piece was in one room.

Or "a single room". If you mean it was really big, you could say "the piece/painting took up a whole room."

I guess its size is not enough with a one of my house's wall.


I guess its size is not enough with ahen compared to one of my house's walls. I guess its size is not enough when compared to one of my house's walls.

Like it is bigger than one of your house's walls?

I studyed about this work today.


I studyied about this workpainting today. I studied about this painting today.

I wanted to search about it befor I saw the work.


I wanted to search about it before I saw ithe work. I wanted to search about it before I saw it.

"It" to avoid too much repetition.

Johannes Vermeer's work made me get interseted in art.


Johannes Vermeer's work is what made me get intersested in art in the first place. Johannes Vermeer's work is what made me interested in art in the first place.

You can say "work" here if you are referring to his entire body of work, ie. all of his paintings. In the first place/originally --> to clarify that it is the thing that first made you interested in art.

I went to Anne Frank's house and ate a apple pie.


I also went to Anne Frank's house and ate an apple pie. I also went to Anne Frank's house and ate an apple pie.

AN before any word starting with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u). You are changing topics here from museums to another thing you did on your trip, so "also" would work well here.

Actually, I prefer my mom's apple pie.


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I bought three Miffi that the Netherlands limited.


I bought three Miffiy that the Netherlands limited. I bought three Miffy that the Netherlands limited.

If you mean the rabbit, I Google it and it seems to be spelled "Miffy" with a "y".

I really enjoyed this trip.


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