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eeprom

Nov. 12, 2021

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Hypochondriac

I've always been kind of an hypochondriac. It's also funny, since you would expect that someone like me likes going to the doctor for every little thing, but this is not the case.
I just go until it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors. It's not a money thing either, since almost everyone in Germany has universal healthcare.

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Hypochondriac

I've always been kind of an hypochondriac.

It's also funny, since you would expect that someone like me likesto enjoy going to the doctor for every little thing, but this is not the case.

I jusdon't go until it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors.

"A certain" and "kind of" give the same connotation here.

It's not a money thing, either, since almost everyone in Germany has universal healthcare.

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Nice writing!

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sivanc

Nov. 13, 2021

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Also agree with the other corrector, might just say "healthcare" instead of "universal healthcare," since that's the program.

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eeprom

Nov. 15, 2021

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Thanks sivanc!

Hypochondriac

I've always been kind of an hypochondriac.

It's also funny, since you would expect that someone like me likes going to the doctor for every little thing, but this is not the case.

I just go untilonly go when it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors.

adverse - bad
averse - prone to avoiding something

It's not a money thing either, since almost everyone in Germany has universalpublic healthcare.

I would say Germany has universal healthcare (a comment on the whole system), and each person has public healthcare (as a single part of the system).

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Short but sweet! You make very few errors, so keep going!

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eeprom

Nov. 15, 2021

738

Thank you!

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I've always been kind of an hypochondriac.


I've always been kind of an hypochondriac.

I've always been kind of an hypochondriac.

It's also funny, since you would expect that someone like me likes going to the doctor for every little thing, but this is not the case.


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It's also funny, since you would expect that someone like me likesto enjoy going to the doctor for every little thing, but this is not the case.

I just go until it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors.


I just go untilonly go when it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors.

adverse - bad averse - prone to avoiding something

I jusdon't go until it's absolutely necessary, which I know is not a good thing to do, but I have kind of a certain adversion to doctors.

"A certain" and "kind of" give the same connotation here.

It's not a money thing either, since almost everyone in Germany has universal healthcare.


It's not a money thing either, since almost everyone in Germany has universalpublic healthcare.

I would say Germany has universal healthcare (a comment on the whole system), and each person has public healthcare (as a single part of the system).

It's not a money thing, either, since almost everyone in Germany has universal healthcare.

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