Feb. 16, 2023
There are four species of hyenas. Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, that is the largest member of the family, with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80 Kg. Neck and forequarters are very developed whereas hindquarters are not that strong. That gives them the very distinctive bear-like look with the forequarters being taller than the rear ones.
The power of their jaw is legendary. In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites of the animal world, in average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance. This feature allows them to feed on bones, skin and eve waste of other animals. They don’t miss any opportunity of becoming a meal!
A couple of more maybe astonishing facts. Females are considerably larger than males. Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules. Males don’t participate in the care of the offspring. Female genitalia are so developed, that it has been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodite, what is not the case. Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, what says a lot about hyenas’ intelligence.
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Females are considerably larger than males.
Hyenas’ society is regulated by matriarchal rules.
Males don’t participate in the care of the offspring.
Female genitalia are so developed, that it hasd been thought for a long time that hyenas were hermaphrodites, whatich is not the case.
Social behavior is very different in comparison to other carnivore mammals like lions or wild dogs and their social rules are more similar to the ones in primates’ societies, whatich says a lot about hyenas’ intelligence.
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Maybe the most popular one is the spotted hyena, that is the largest member of the family, with individuals ranging from 40 to more than 80 Kg.
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Neck and forequarters are very developed whereas hindquarters are not that strong.
"Forequarters" is technically correct but it's an uncommon word.
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In relation to their size they have one of the most powerful bites of the animal world, in average 40% more powerful than that of a leopard, for instance.
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