Feb. 13, 2023
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I remember watching to a national geographic documentary about lions and hyenas several years ago. It was maybe the first time when I saw that hyenas are much more than scavengers. They are astonishing hunters, who prey on a broad spectrum of species and take down the vast majority of the animals they feed on. In fact, lions are more prone to eat carrion than hyenas do.
Hyenas don’t enjoy a good reputation. It is true that their look seems ugly and clumsy at first sight. I have even been told that hyenas look like the ugliest dog ever. Others are of the opinion that they look foolish. All these statements are, at least, controversial and several of them are a matter of taste. However, hyenas are very intelligent animals and very successful hunters.
A typical error is the inclusion of hyenas in the canine family. They don’t belong to this group and they are more related to mongooses and genets (viverridae family).
Hyenas - 1
I remember watching to a nNational gGeographic documentary about lions and hyenas several years ago.
It was maybe the first time whenthat I saw that hyenas are much more than scavengers.
They are astonishing hunters, who prey on a broad spectrum of species and take down the vast majority of the animals they feed on.
In fact, lions are more prone to eat carrion than hyenas do.
Hyenas don’t enjoyhave a good reputation.
It is true that their looks seems ugly and clumsy at first sight.
I have even been told that hyenas look like the ugliest dog ever.
Others are of the opinion that they look foolish.
All these statements are, at least, controversial and several of them are a matter of taste.
Hyenas, however, hyenas are very intelligent animals and very successful hunters.
We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.
A typical error is the inclusion of hyenas in the canine family.
They don’t belong to this group andbecause they are more related to mongooses and genets (viverridae family).
The plural of "mongoose" is "mongoose."
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Good work!
Hyenas - 1
I remember watching to a national geographic documentary about lions and hyenas several years ago.
It was maybe the first time when I sawthat I noticed that hyenas are much more than scavengers.
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They are astonishing hunters, who prey on a broad spectrum of species and take down the vast majority of the animals they feed on.
In fact, lions are more prone to eating carrion than hyenas doare.
Hyenas don’t enjoy a good reputation.
I found this sentence odd but also very poetic / lyrical, it’s not a usual usage but it’s a nice saying, so well done
It is true that theiry look seems ugly and clumsy at first sight.
I have even been told that hyenas look like the ugliest dog ever.
Others are of the opinion that they look foolish.
All these statements are, at least, controversial and several of them are a matter of taste.
However, hyenas are very intelligent animals and very successful hunters.
A typical error is the inclusion of hyenas in the canine family.
They don’t belong to this group and they are more related to mongooses and genets (the viverridae family).
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Lovely work I enjoyed reading this.
Feb. 15, 2023
Thanks for the correction mari :-)
I remember watching to a national geographic documentary about lions and hyenas several years ago.
It was maybe the first time when I sawI realized that hyenas are much more than scavengers.
They are astonishing hunters, who prey on a broad spectrum of species and take down the vast majority of the animals they feed on.
In fact, lions are more prone to eat carrion than hyenas doare.
Hyenas don’t enjoyhave a good reputation.
It is true that their lookappearance seems ugly and clumsy at first sight.
I have even been told that hyenas look like the ugliest dog ever.
Others are of the opinion that they look foolish.
All these statements are, at least, controversial and several of them are a matter of taste.
However, hyenas are very intelligent animals and very successful hunters.
A typical error is the inclusion of hyenas in the canine family.
They don’t belong to this group and they are more closely related to mongooses and genets (viverridae family).
Feb. 13, 2023
Thanks for the correction js
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