tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0
Hydrogen water

I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.
Hydrogen water in aluminium cans were distributed to foreign press at G20 conference in Japan last year.
It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal with building a sustainable society so that they didn't serve with plastic bottles.
I wish they would stop embarrassing us. (or "I wish they quit making a fool of themselves.")
By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species in their body.
Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easier than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.
Some articles said that hydrogen molecules depressed blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.
It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.
The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain high concentration at which those effects are appeared.


水素水というのは海外でも知られているのだろうか?
昨年の日本で開催されたG20で、アルミ缶に入った水素水が海外の報道関係者に配られた。
外務省は日本がいかに持続可能な社会づくりに取り組んでいるかをアピールするために、ペットボトルでの水の提供をやめたかったようだ。
世界に向けてこんな恥さらししないでくれよとつくづく思う。
それはさておき、体内の活性酸素を除去することから水素水は身体にいいと信じている人はそれなりにいる。
私はそのような意見に全く同意できないが、意外にも科学的にこれを否定することは容易ではない。
水素分子が活性酸素を除去することにより血圧上昇・炎症・疲労が抑制されるとする論文もいくつかでている。
論文の信ぴょう性はさておき、水素分子の有効性自体を否定するは難しいだろう。
最も簡単な説明は、水素を論文で示されるような高濃度で封入させ流通させることはほぼ不可能だということだ。

Corrections

I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cansAluminum cans of hydrogen water were distributed to foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

singular noun goes with "was", while plural noun goes with "were"

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so that they didn't serve withby not serving plastic bottles.

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

I guess "reactive oxygen species" is a technical term so okay as is

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

Avoid the double negative to make it easier on the reader

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depressedreduce blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

It is hard to deny the efficienacy of hydrogen molecules itself without ascertaining the reliability of those articles.

efficiency asks how well it works, but efficacy is asks whether it works or not

The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain a high enough concentration at which those effects arecan appeared.

Feedback

I never heard of hydrogen infused water before reading your post. The idea sounds interesting but maybe the achieving the effective concentration by drinking water is impractical. By the way, I've never had just water from a can before.

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

It is hard to deny the efficienacy of hydrogen molecules itself without ascertaining the reliability of those articles.

your correction is great! That's exactly what I wanted to say.

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans might surprise people by cans rather than by what it contained.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to the foreign press at a G20 conference in Japan last year.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so; that's why they didn't serve withe Hydrogen water in plastic bottles.

I wish they would stop embarrassing us.

(or "I wish they quit making a fool of themselves. ")

Both make sense!

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi, it's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

"it's harder than I thought" is a commonly used phrase

I also removed "statement" to clarify that you're disagreeing with the claim that "hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species from their body", and not the entire statement that "some people seriously believe that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species from their body."

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depcresased blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

This sentence doesn't make sense, but I'm not sure how to correct it because I can't understand Japanese yet.

The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain the high concentration at which those effects are appeared.

Feedback

Amazing! I wish that one day my Japanese can be as good as your English is now. You've chosen advanced subjects to write about (politics and science), so this is great.

katriniac's avatar
katriniac

Aug. 23, 2020

0

Also, I can confirm that "reactive oxygen species" is a phrase used in English; it's commonly used in scientific settings.

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

I'm really glad to see your comment! I'm worried whether my topics were boring or not.

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

I meant to say "If you ignored the reliability, it is difficult to prove that this statement is false". Such a phenomena would happen even if you think logically.

I wonder if "Hydrogen (-rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to the foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

hydrogen water was distributed -- the water is the subject of the sentence, not the cans, so you need a verb that goes with a singular noun.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs mewanted to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society, so that they didn't userve with plastic bottles.

I wish they would stop embarrassing us.

(or "I wish they quit making a fool of themselves. ")

By the way, sSome people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspectivexpected to prove scientifically that it is false.

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depressedreduce blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'oxygen species'. Species is definitely not the right word -- usually it refers to types of plants or animals.

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

I don't know what you are trying to say.
The articles are not reliable, so maybe the hydrogen is not as effective as they say.??
Or:
I can't disprove that hydrogen has these effects because there are no articles explaining why it can't work.??

The most easiest explanationlikely reason (why hydrogen doesn't work?) is that it is nearly impossible to retainmaintain the high concentration at which required for thoese effects are appeared.

Feedback

Well done overall. A difficult topic.

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

Thank you for your detailed correction! I meant to say "If you ignored the reliability, it is difficult to prove that this statement is false". Such a phenomena would happen even if you think logically.

0

Hydrogen water

I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so that, they didn't serve withater in plastic bottles.

I wish they would stop embarrassing us.

(or "I wish they would quit making a fools of themselves. ")

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species in their body.

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

Some articles said that hydrogen molecules depressed blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen specimolecules.

It is hard to deny the efficiencyacy(?) of hydrogen molecules itself withoutthemselves without knowing the reliability of those articles.

The most easiestlikely explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain high concentrations at which those effects are appeared.

Aik's avatar
Aik

Aug. 23, 2020

0

Never heard of 'hydrogen water' before, but it does sound like crackpot nonsense...

tommy's avatar
tommy

Aug. 23, 2020

0

Thank you for your correction. I thoght that 'hydrogen water' are known to people overseas because you can find the article at Wikipedia in English.

Hydrogen water


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.


I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

I wonder if "Hydrogen (-rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

I wonder if "Hydrogen (rich) water" is known to people in overseas.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans were distributed to foreign press at G20 conference in Japan last year.


Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to the foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

hydrogen water was distributed -- the water is the subject of the sentence, not the cans, so you need a verb that goes with a singular noun.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cans wereas distributed to the foreign press at a G20 conference in Japan last year.

Hydrogen water in aluminium cansAluminum cans of hydrogen water were distributed to foreign press at the G20 conference in Japan last year.

singular noun goes with "was", while plural noun goes with "were"

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal with building a sustainable society so that they didn't serve with plastic bottles.


It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so that, they didn't serve withater in plastic bottles.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs mewanted to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society, so that they didn't userve with plastic bottles.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so; that's why they didn't serve withe Hydrogen water in plastic bottles.

It appears that the Ministry of Foreign Affairs meant to show off how Japan deal withis building a sustainable society so that they didn't serve withby not serving plastic bottles.

I wish they would stop embarrassing us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(or "I wish they quit making a fool of themselves. ")


(or "I wish they would quit making a fools of themselves. ")

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(or "I wish they quit making a fool of themselves. ")

Both make sense!

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species in their body.


By the way, sSome people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species in their body.

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

By the way, some people seriously believes that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species infrom their body.

I guess "reactive oxygen species" is a technical term so okay as is

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easier than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.


Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspectivexpected to prove scientifically that it is false.

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi, it's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

"it's harder than I thought" is a commonly used phrase I also removed "statement" to clarify that you're disagreeing with the claim that "hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species from their body", and not the entire statement that "some people seriously believe that Hydrogen water is good for their health because hydrogen molecules remove reactive oxygen species from their body."

Though I totally disagree with the above statement, it isn't easi's harder than I thought to verify that it is false from a scientific perspective.

Avoid the double negative to make it easier on the reader

Some articles said that hydrogen molecules depressed blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.


Some articles said that hydrogen molecules depressed blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen specimolecules.

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depressedreduce blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'oxygen species'. Species is definitely not the right word -- usually it refers to types of plants or animals.

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depcresased blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

Some articles saidy that hydrogen molecules depressedreduce blood pressure, inflammation, and fatigue by removing reactive oxygen species.

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.


It is hard to deny the efficiencyacy(?) of hydrogen molecules itself withoutthemselves without knowing the reliability of those articles.

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

I don't know what you are trying to say. The articles are not reliable, so maybe the hydrogen is not as effective as they say.?? Or: I can't disprove that hydrogen has these effects because there are no articles explaining why it can't work.??

It is hard to deny the efficiency of hydrogen molecules itself without reliability of those articles.

This sentence doesn't make sense, but I'm not sure how to correct it because I can't understand Japanese yet.

It is hard to deny the efficienacy of hydrogen molecules itself without ascertaining the reliability of those articles.

efficiency asks how well it works, but efficacy is asks whether it works or not

The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain high concentration at which those effects are appeared.


The most easiestlikely explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain high concentrations at which those effects are appeared.

The most easiest explanationlikely reason (why hydrogen doesn't work?) is that it is nearly impossible to retainmaintain the high concentration at which required for thoese effects are appeared.

The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain the high concentration at which those effects are appeared.

The most easiest explanation is that it is nearly impossible to retain a high enough concentration at which those effects arecan appeared.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium