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June 15, 2021

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Hydrangea

Today I went to a temple which is famous for many hydrangeas.
Hydrangeas bloom in around late June in my region, so most of them were still in bud today(15, June).
However some hydrangeas were blooming with pink, purple or blue flowers.
They were so beautiful that I could feel the season.
I appreciate that Japan has four different seasons because I can realize and enjoy the seasonal changing.

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Hydrangeas

I feel like this would be more appropriate as a title based on the context of the entry.

Today I went to a temple which is famous for its many hydrangeas.

Hydrangeas bloom in around late June in my region, so most of them were still in bud today(15, (June 15).

However some hydrangeas were blooming withand had pink, purple, or blue flowers.

"With" kind of sounded odd to me here, though I don't know if it's wrong.

They were so beautiful that I couldthey made me feel that the season had started.

I think this is what you were trying to say, but feel free to comment if it wasn't and I'll try to rephrase it.

I appreciate that Japan has four different seasons, because I can realiznotice and enjoy the seasonal changingchanges in the seasons.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Hydrangea


Hydrangeas

I feel like this would be more appropriate as a title based on the context of the entry.

Today I went to a temple which is famous for many hydrangeas.


Today I went to a temple which is famous for its many hydrangeas.

Hydrangeas bloom in around late June in my region, so most of them were still in bud today(15, June).


Hydrangeas bloom in around late June in my region, so most of them were still in bud today(15, (June 15).

However some hydrangeas were blooming with pink, purple or blue flowers.


However some hydrangeas were blooming withand had pink, purple, or blue flowers.

"With" kind of sounded odd to me here, though I don't know if it's wrong.

They were so beautiful that I could feel the season.


They were so beautiful that I couldthey made me feel that the season had started.

I think this is what you were trying to say, but feel free to comment if it wasn't and I'll try to rephrase it.

I appreciate that Japan has four different seasons because I can realize and enjoy the seasonal changing.


I appreciate that Japan has four different seasons, because I can realiznotice and enjoy the seasonal changingchanges in the seasons.

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