My bBiggest mMotivation is: s Shame My Biggest Motivation is Shame

You don't need the semicolon there since you have 'is.' If you do want it, rephrase the title to: "My Biggest Motivation: Shame."

My biggest motivation is: shame My biggest motivation is shame

My bBiggest mMotivation is: s Shame My Biggest Motivation is Shame

I don't know how to write/phrase the tittle to better in order to express my feelings. I don't know how to write/phrase the tittle to better express my feelings.

I don't know how to write the tittle better in order to express my feelings. I don't know how to write the title better in order to express my feelings.

I don't know how to write the tittle better in order to express my feelings. I don't know how to write the tittle better in order to express my feelings.

That's okay! We're here to help. In English, when we refer to our own feelings, it's always plural.

I don't know how to write the tittle better in order to express my feeling. I don't know how to write the title better in order to express my feeling.

I hope through the text you can figure out what I am trying to say. I hope through the text you can figure out what I am trying to say.

I hope through the textwriting you can figure out what I am trying to say. I hope through writing you can figure out what I am trying to say.

or, I hope by writing you can figure out what I am trying to say.

I hope through the text you can figure out what I am trying to say. I hope through the text you can figure out what I am trying to say.

Since high- school, I became (more) aware of shame... Since high school, I became (more) aware of shame...

I feel like adding 'more' would be accurate unless you really did not feel shame at all until high school. Connect this sentence to the next one

Since high-school I became aware've been aware of the feeling of shame. Since high-school I've been aware of the feeling of shame.

If you use "since", you have to use present tense.

Since high- school I became've been aware of shame. Since high school I've been aware of shame.

or I've been aware of shame since since high school.

Since high-school I became aware of (the feeling of / my) shame. Since high-school I became aware of (the feeling of / my) shame.

Shame as a concept can be very broad, from shame that you feel internally to the shame from other people. It is good to specify.

A...as I experienced many failures, regarding to love, school (subjects), etc. ...as I experienced many failures regarding love, school (subjects), etc.

As I experienced many failures, regarding to love, school subjects, etc., I realized how strong it was, how so much pain can feel as if your skin were burning. As I experienced many failures, regarding love, school subjects, etc., I realized how strong it was, how so much pain can feel as if your skin were burning.

This is a very beautiful sentence. I don't think failing in love is something about which to be ashamed. Sure, it hurts and is frustrating and disappointing but please try to avoid feeling shame because of it.

As I experienced many failures, (regarding / relating to) love, subjects (school subjects?) , etc. As I experienced many failures, (regarding / relating to) love, subjects (school subjects?) , etc.

'regarding to' is not really used, you just need 'regarding (thing).' Otherwise you can use 'relating to' I think you meant "other subjects" aka other things aside from just love

I realized how strong it was, how would cause a pain as big; it was as if myour skin was burning in pain. I realized how strong it was; it was as if my skin was burning in pain.

You don't need to use 'as if' if you want a stronger metaphorical effect. See here: "I realized how strong it was, how my skin would burn in pain."

I realized how strong it was, how would cause a pain as big as if your skin was were burning alive. I realized how strong it was, how would cause a pain as big as if you were burning alive.

I realized how strong it was, how would cause a pain as big as if your skin was burning.

This was an incomplete sentence so I deleted it and added it to the previous line.

I realized how strong it was, how wit could cause a pain as big(deep / potent ) as if your skin was burning. I realized how strong it was, how it could cause a pain as (deep / potent ) as if your skin was burning.

'big' is usually used for physical sizes 'could' = potential to hurt this bad. 'would' implies it hurts this much every time

Since then, I started working so hard in order to avoid shame,: the shame of failing, mistaking, loosing(and) losing (etc). Since then, I started working so hard in order to avoid shame: the shame of failing, mistaking, (and) losing (etc).

Choose 'and' or 'etc' depending on your intentions.

Since then I started working sovery hard in order to avoid shame, the shame of failing, mistaking a mistake, loosing. Since then I started working very hard in order to avoid shame, the shame of failing, making a mistake, losing.

Since then I started working so hard in order to avoid shame, the shame of failing, making mistakinges, loosing. Since then I started working so hard in order to avoid shame, the shame of failing, making mistakes, losing.

I find this heartbreaking.

Since then I started working so hard in order to avoid shame, (whether it be/ such as) the shame of failing, mistaking, lo mistakes, or losing. Since then I started working hard in order to avoid shame, (whether it be/ such as) the shame of failing, making mistakes, or losing.

Must connect "the shame of.." to sentence using conjunction loosing = not being as tight, losing = failing Mistaking usually means having the wrong idea (e.g. mistaking a lion for a tiger) . For a more general use, 'making mistakes' work

High school was, for me, one of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just forto not feeling ashamed. High school was, for me, one of the best years of my life even though I was constantly working so hard just to not feel ashamed.

High school was for me one of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just forto not feeling ashamed. High school was for me one of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just to not feel ashamed.

High school was for me onsome of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just for notto avoid feeling ashamed. High school was for me some of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just to avoid feeling ashamed.

"Years" is plural so I replaced "one" with "some."

High school was for me onsome of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just forto not feeling ashamed. High school was for me some of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just to not feel ashamed.

High school is multiple years, so 'one' does not work

But byat that time I did not realize that... But at that time I did not realize that...

Connect this sentence to the next one.

But byat thate time I did not realize that. But at the time I did not realize that.

But by that time I did not realize that.

This is an incomplete sentence so I deleted it and added it to the next line.

But by(during that time / back then) I did not realize that. But (during that time / back then) I did not realize that.

I...in order to avoid shame, I've been working sovery hard, which has leading me to certain positive thingoutcomes such as: getting into a good University and getting a job. ...in order to avoid shame, I've been working very hard, leading me to positive outcomes such as getting into a good University and getting a job.

IBut at that time I did not realize that in order to avoid shame, I'ved been working so hard, which hasthen lead me to certain positive things such as: getting into a good University and getting a job. But at that time I did not realize that in order to avoid shame, I'd been working so hard, which then lead me to certain positive things such as getting into a good University and getting a job.

Congratulations!" This is past tense so I changed it to "I'd been working so hard ..."

In order to avoid shame, I've been working so hard, which has lead me to certain positive things such as: getting in a good Uuniversity and getting a job. In order to avoid shame, I've been working so hard, which has lead to certain positive things such as getting in a good university and getting a job.

So, I was thinking,... So, I was thinking,...

continue to next sentence

..."Why after I succeed my emotions are not so strong asdo I not feel as strongly when I succeed compared to when I fail?" ..."Why do I not feel as strongly when I succeed compared to when I fail?"

"Why after I succeed my emotions re my emotions after I succeed not as strong as when I fail?," and that's because I work so hared not so strong as when Ifor receiving praise but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that," "that was really not difficult to do," "you're clever so then why did you fail?" "Why are my emotions after I succeed not as strong as when I fail?," and that's because I work so hard not for receiving praise but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that," "that was really not difficult to do," "you're clever so then why did you fail?"

This is a normal part of the human condition. Practicing gratitude really helps to counter this.

"Why aAfter I succeeding, why are my emotions are not aso strong as when I failed?" "After succeeding, why are my emotions not as strong as when I failed?"

Don't use 'so strong as', use 'as strong as'

and tThat's because I work so hard not for praisinge but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that"," "that was really not that difficult to do", "," "if you're clever then why did you fail"." That's because I work so hard not for praise but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that," "that was really not that difficult to do," "if you're clever then why did you fail."

aAnd that's because I work so hard not for praisinge but for avoiding the shame of sentences like "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever then why did you fail". And that's because I work so hard not for praise but for avoiding the shame of sentences like "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever then why did you fail".

and that's because I work so hard not for praising but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever then why did you fail".

This is another sentence fragment.

and that's because I work so hard not for praisinge but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever thenso why did you fail". and that's because I work so hard not for praise but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever so why did you fail".

praise = noun compared to praising = act

The same goes infor love. The same goes for love.

The same goes infor love. The same goes for love.

I cannot takebe in a relationship in which I do not feel likeas if I am winning. I cannot be in a relationship in which I do not feel as if I am winning.

Whoa! "Be in a relationship" is the phrase we use in the US.

Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then, but I do not think is something to find motivation in. Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then, but I do not think is something to find motivation in.

Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it is something to find motivation in. Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it is something to find motivation in.

Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it is something in which to find motivation in. Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it is something in which to find motivation.

I agree.

Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it's something to find motivation infrom. Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think it's something to find motivation from.

I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like "is the minimumthink to myself, "is this really all you couldan do?". I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I think to myself, "is this really all you can do?"

I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like, "Is this the minimum that you couldan do?". I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like, "Is this the minimum that you can do?"

I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like "it's the minimum you could do". I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like "it's the minimum you could do".