March 7, 2022
Hurt My Foot
My right foot gets hurt by accident.
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by making a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attention when I walk.
Hurt My Foot
My right foot getsgot hurt by accident.
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by makingand made a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attention when I walk.
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I hope you get well soon! Great job! :)
March 8, 2022
Thank you very much. :)
(I) Hurt My Foot
Your title is correct but you could also add "I"
MI hurt my right foot gets hurt by accident.
Or "My right foot got hurt by accident"
When I tried to get on a bus, I was offlost balance by making a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attentionbe careful when I walk.
The sentence is correct but this correction sounds more natural
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Very good writing! Get well soon :)
March 7, 2022
Thank you very much. :)
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Hurt My Foot (I) Hurt My Foot Your title is correct but you could also add "I" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My right foot gets hurt by accident.
Or "My right foot got hurt by accident" My right foot |
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When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by making a false step. When I tried to get on a bus, I When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance |
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At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks. |
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I need to pay attention when I walk. I need to The sentence is correct but this correction sounds more natural This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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