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sonny77

March 10, 2021

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Humans...

The upright and on two legs walking people on the planet earth are called humans.
They see themselves as the top of the evolution and the most intelligent beings on their planet. But still they fail to prove this with their behavior.

Though being a part of this species, I have difficulties to understand, what exactly we are: the most intelligent or the most stupid species. We fight each other, sometimes with the aim of erasing whole races - and not because of food or something life-threatening. Often it's because of different thoughts about things, noone ever has really seen: god.
Furthermore, we destroy our planet and steal the fundamental basic requirements for life on earth from our great-great-great-...-grandchildren. We even kill other beings, we call them animals, often without any noble reason - we would have enough other food. Some animals die by the hand of humans only because they look fancy.

So, however our world functions and whatever you might fear concerning the humans: just go back to your planet, grab some popcorn and soda and wait and watch us - we'll manage to erase ourselves from existing within no time...

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Humans...

The upright and on two legs walkingbipedal people on the planet eEarth are called humans.

They see themselves as the top of thepeak of evolution and the most intelligent beings on their planet.

But they still they fail to prove this with their behavior.

Though being a part of this species, I have difficulties to understand,ing what we are exactly we are: the most intelligent or the most stupid species.

We fight each other, sometimes with the aim of erasing whole races -population, and not because of food or something life-threatening.

Often it's because of different thoughts about things, that no one ever has really seen: g, God.

Furthermore, we destroy our planet and steal the basic, fundamental basic requirements for life on eEarth from our great-great-great-...-grandchildren.

We even kill other beings, we call them animals, often without any noble reason -as we would still have enough other foodfood with doing it.

Some animals die by the hand of humans onsimply because they look fancy.

So, however our world functions and whatever you might fear concerning the humans:, just go back to your planet, grab some popcorn and soda, and waitch us and waitch us - we'll manage to erase ourselves from existingence within no time...

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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sonny77

March 14, 2021

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Thanks a lot! They'll really help improving my use of English language.

Humans...


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The upright and on two legs walking people on the planet earth are called humans.


The upright and on two legs walkingbipedal people on the planet eEarth are called humans.

They see themselves as the top of the evolution and the most intelligent beings on their planet.


They see themselves as the top of thepeak of evolution and the most intelligent beings on their planet.

But still they fail to prove this with their behavior.


But they still they fail to prove this with their behavior.

Though being a part of this species, I have difficulties to understand, what exactly we are: the most intelligent or the most stupid species.


Though being a part of this species, I have difficulties to understand,ing what we are exactly we are: the most intelligent or the most stupid species.

We fight each other, sometimes with the aim of erasing whole races - and not because of food or something life-threatening.


We fight each other, sometimes with the aim of erasing whole races -population, and not because of food or something life-threatening.

Often it's because of different thoughts about things, noone ever has really seen: god.


Often it's because of different thoughts about things, that no one ever has really seen: g, God.

Furthermore, we destroy our planet and steal the fundamental basic requirements for life on earth from our great-great-great-...-grandchildren.


Furthermore, we destroy our planet and steal the basic, fundamental basic requirements for life on eEarth from our great-great-great-...-grandchildren.

We even kill other beings, we call them animals, often without any noble reason - we would have enough other food.


We even kill other beings, we call them animals, often without any noble reason -as we would still have enough other foodfood with doing it.

Some animals die by the hand of humans only because they look fancy.


Some animals die by the hand of humans onsimply because they look fancy.

So, however our world functions and whatever you might fear concerning the humans: just go back to your planet, grab some popcorn and soda and wait and watch us - we'll manage to erase ourselves from existing within no time...


So, however our world functions and whatever you might fear concerning the humans:, just go back to your planet, grab some popcorn and soda, and waitch us and waitch us - we'll manage to erase ourselves from existingence within no time...

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