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Huffpost personal articles

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

In the old days, the blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt etc. Those are exactly the texts that I had to refer to when learning French, for writing and also for speaking. Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, the users swicthed to twitter, Instagram, or other SNS which require less sentences. But I needed something that is speaking of their own lives using casual words and describing their emotion with their daily vocabularies.

One day, one French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole". It was more than perfect. Each writer, who is amateur and a ordinary person who justed wanted to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words. It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

To improve my English skill, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal". They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and in my opinion many differences are found between the English version and the French version. I would like to write on it here in the near future.

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When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

In the old days, the blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt etc.

Those are exactly the texts that I had to refer to when learning French, for writing and also for speaking.

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, t. The users swictched to twitter, Instagram, or other SNSs which require less sentenceshorter posts.

Pay attention to the difference between less / fewer

But I needed something that is speaking of their own lives using casual words and describing their emotion with their everydaily vocabulariesy.

One day, one French corrector suggested the HuffpPost articles in the section "prise de parole".

It was more than perfect.

Each writer, who is amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanteds to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

The verbs should be consistent in their tense

It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, and the perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

understand the problems [...] and the perspectives [...]

To improve my English skill, I started reading the English HuffpPost articles in the section "Personal" section.

They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and in my opinion many differences are found between the English version and the French version.

I would like to write on it here in the near future.

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That sounds like a great source of content for you. Keep writing!

Huffpost p's Personal aArticles

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

In the old days, these blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt, etc.

Those are exactly the texts that I had to refer to when learning French, for writing and also for speaking.

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, the users swictched to twitter, Instagram, or other SNS platforms which require less sentences.

But I needed something that is speaking of theirtalked about people's own lives using casual words and describing their emotions with their dailyusual vocabulariesy.

One day, onea French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole" section.

It was more than perfect.

Each writer, who is an amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanteds to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

To improve my English skills, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal" section.

They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and, in my opinion, many differences arcan be found between the English version and theand French versions.

I would like to write onabout it here in the near future.

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すごい!楽しみです。よく出来ました!

Huffpost personal articles

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

In the old days, the blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt, etc.

Those are exactly the kinds of texts that I had to refer to when learning French, forhow to writinge and also for speak ing French.

Mostly a stylistic difference, but reads a bit more naturally.

Finding them wasn't an easy task:; most of the blogs are gone, the users swictched to tTwitter, or Instagram, or other SNSapps which require lessfewer sentences.

"SNS" is commonly used in Japanese, but in English we use "social media websites" or "social media apps" (or just "apps" for short).

But I needed something that is speaking ofwhere people write about their own lives using casual words and describing their emotions with their everydaily vocabulariesy.

One day, onea French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole".

The original sentence is great! This is just a stylistic change to avoid the repetition of "one"

It was more than perfect.

Each writer, who is an amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanted to share their views, thoughts, and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

This isn't an easy sentence to write! Great job :)

It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, and the perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

To improve my English skill, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal" section.

They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and in my opinion, there are many differences are found between the English version and the French version.

I would like to write onabout it here in the near future.

Feedback

Really nice post! Your writing was very easy to understand, and really communicated what you wanted to say. Most of the corrections are minor grammar fixes and stylistic changes since you're already a great writer :)

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Huffpost p's Personal aArticles

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).


When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

When I was posting my entries in French here, I was eargerly looking for personal texts in French which are composed of many sentences starting with "je" ("I" in English).

In the old days, the blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt etc.


In the old days, the blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt, etc.

In the old days, these blogs were prevalent and many people used to write what happened to them that day, how they felt, etc.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Those are exactly the texts that I had to refer to when learning French, for writing and also for speaking.


Those are exactly the kinds of texts that I had to refer to when learning French, forhow to writinge and also for speak ing French.

Mostly a stylistic difference, but reads a bit more naturally.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, the users swicthed to twitter, Instagram, or other SNS which requires less sentences.


But I needed something that is speaking of their own lifes using casual words and describing their emotion with their daily vocabularies.


One day, one French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole".


One day, onea French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole".

The original sentence is great! This is just a stylistic change to avoid the repetition of "one"

One day, onea French corrector suggested the Huffpost articles in the section "prise de parole" section.

One day, one French corrector suggested the HuffpPost articles in the section "prise de parole".

It was more than perfect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Each writer, who is amateur and a ordinary person who justed wanted to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.


Each writer, who is an amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanted to share their views, thoughts, and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

This isn't an easy sentence to write! Great job :)

Each writer, who is an amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanteds to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

Each writer, who is amateur and an ordinary person who justed wanteds to share their views, thoughts and their lives, depicts what they are going through with nuanced but not obsolete words.

The verbs should be consistent in their tense

It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.


It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, and the perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It also helped me understand the problems that France faces right now, and the perspectives of the minority which are not always communicated to us through the news.

understand the problems [...] and the perspectives [...]

To improve my English skill, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal".


To improve my English skill, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal" section.

To improve my English skills, I started reading the English Huffpost articles in the section "Personal" section.

To improve my English skill, I started reading the English HuffpPost articles in the section "Personal" section.

They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and in my opinion many differences are found between the English version and the French version.


They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and in my opinion, there are many differences are found between the English version and the French version.

They offer a lot of insights into how people live in America (I guess), and, in my opinion, many differences arcan be found between the English version and theand French versions.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would like to write on it here in the near future.


I would like to write onabout it here in the near future.

I would like to write onabout it here in the near future.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, the users swicthed to twitter, Instagram, or other SNS which require less sentences.


Finding them wasn't an easy task:; most of the blogs are gone, the users swictched to tTwitter, or Instagram, or other SNSapps which require lessfewer sentences.

"SNS" is commonly used in Japanese, but in English we use "social media websites" or "social media apps" (or just "apps" for short).

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, the users swictched to twitter, Instagram, or other SNS platforms which require less sentences.

Finding them wasn't an easy task: most of the blogs are gone, t. The users swictched to twitter, Instagram, or other SNSs which require less sentenceshorter posts.

Pay attention to the difference between less / fewer

But I needed something that is speaking of their own lives using casual words and describing their emotion with their daily vocabularies.


But I needed something that is speaking ofwhere people write about their own lives using casual words and describing their emotions with their everydaily vocabulariesy.

But I needed something that is speaking of theirtalked about people's own lives using casual words and describing their emotions with their dailyusual vocabulariesy.

But I needed something that is speaking of their own lives using casual words and describing their emotion with their everydaily vocabulariesy.

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