Feb. 19, 2021
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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder. First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains. At first I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would be better itself, but it didn’t. A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased. But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages. It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan. This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to see.
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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder.
Last winter, I might have frozen my left shoulder.
First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains.
At first, I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would beget better by itself, but it didn’t.
At first, I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would get better by itself, but it didn’t.
A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased.
A few days ago, I went to a blind massage shop and had a few massages, my symptoms eased.
But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages.
It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan.
It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get treatment.
This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to seetake care of it.
This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to take care of it.
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Really good, you write really well!
Feb. 21, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder.
Last winter, I might have frozen |
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First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would be better itself, but it didn’t.
At first, I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would |
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A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased.
A few days ago, I went to a blind |
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But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan.
It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get |
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This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to see.
This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to |
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