It is cloudy and mild day , and. I like theis weather so much. It is cloudy and mild day. I like this weather so much.

"The" is better for when you are talking about something generally. In this case you want to use "this" to refer specifically this day.

I ridingode a sharinged bike to work , the breeze kissed my face , which made me feel comfortable , although I was a little cold. I rode a shared bike to work, the breeze kissed my face, which made me feel comfortable, although I was a little cold.

You don't need to leave a space after a comma.

I ridingode a sharinged bike to work , the breeze kissed my face , which made me feel comfortable , although I was a little cold. I rode a shared bike to work, the breeze kissed my face, which made me feel comfortable, although I was a little cold.

The comma "," usually doesn't have a space between the word before it. For example "hi, how are you?"

When I was working , I thought it was boring . When I was working, I thought it was boring .

When I was wborking ,I thought ited while I was bworking . I was bored while I was working.

Actually , I do not love my job. Actually, I do not love my job.

Actually , I do not love my job. Actually, I do not love my job.

Perhaps I hate every job? Perhaps I hate every job?

However , I do not know what I really like, and I am not enough brave am not brave enough to quit my job. However, I do not know what I really like, and I am not brave enough to quit my job.

However , I do not know what I really like, and I am not enough brave to quit my job. However, I do not know what I really like, and I am not enough brave to quit my job.

Because normal people should have a a job and I I also need a job to earn money . Because normal people should have a job and I also need a job to earn money.

Because normal people should have a job and I also need a job to earn money . Because normal people should have a job and I also need a job to earn money.

Now , I will spend some of my spare time to learn English. Now , I will spend some of my spare time to learn English.

Now , I will spend some spare time to learn English. Now, I will spend some spare time to learn English.

I hope I I can communicate with others in English. I hope I can communicate with others in English.

Maybe I I could be an English teacher . Maybe I could be an English teacher.

Just leave a space between each word.

Maybe I could be an English teacher . Maybe I could be an English teacher.

And I wish I can know what I really like and what I wanna do one day. And I wish I can know what I really like and what I wanna do one day.

Thank you for your reading and correcting (my work). Thank you for your reading and correcting (my work).