Jan. 17, 2023
Diary 1/15 & 1/16
1/15
Today I go to the library as usual. I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow. As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's process. I'm so happy that I finished it! And I could let my hair down tomorrow!
1/16
In the morning,we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''. It is a touching movie. I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying. Nonetheless,I paid most of attention on the appearances of main-actor and main-actress. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. We visit Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition. Although I'm not familiar with arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding rejection. It's really surprised me. Consequently, I bought some merchandises, their qualities are so good. One day, I must see authentic work of these paintings!
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Diary 1/15 & 1/16
1/15
Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual.
I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow.
As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying forover the past four days in order to catch up to tomorrow's process.
As a consequence, I spent more time than usual studying over the past four days in order to catch up to tomorrow.
I'm so happy that I finished it!
And I couldThen I can let my hair down tomorrow!
Then I can let my hair down tomorrow!
1/16
In the morning, we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''.
In the morning, we saw a movie called "Someday Or One Day''.
It is a touching movie.
I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying.
Nonetheless, I paid most of attention ton the appearances of the main- actor and main- actress.
Nonetheless, I paid most attention to the appearances of the main actor and main actress.
They awere toso charming to movehat my eyes frommoved with them.
They were so charming that my eyes moved with them.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibit after lunch.
Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition.
Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibit.
Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings.
It also hasd an amazing part section: 540 degrees surrounding re projection.
It also had an amazing section: 540 degrees surround projection.
It's really surprised me.
It really surprised me.
Consequently, I bought some merchandises, because their qualities arey was so good.
Consequently, I bought some merchandise because their quality was so good.
One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings! One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings!
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That sounds like a fun day. Good work!
Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual.
I'm so excited that I willo hang out with my friend tomorrow.
I'm so excited to hang out with my friend tomorrow.
As a consequence, I hadve spent more time than usual by studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's processmake up for the study I will miss tomorrow.
As a consequence I have spent more time than usual by studying for four days in order to make up for the study I will miss tomorrow.
'Catch up' is for when you are already behind. You cannot 'catch up' something you will miss in the future.
I'm so happy that I have finished it! I'm so happy that I have finished it!
And I couldan let my hair down tomorrow!
And I can let my hair down tomorrow!
In the morning, we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''.
In the morning we saw a movie called "Someday Or One Day''.
It is a touching movie.
I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying.
Nonetheless, I paid the most of attention ton the appearances of the main- actor and main- actress.
Nonetheless I paid the most attention to the appearances of the main actor and main actress.
Don't forget the word 'the'. Especially in front of 'main actor'.
They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are too charming to move my eyes from them.
They are so charming that I cannot stop looking at them.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch.
Since I sawseeing it on Facebook, I had'd been lookeding forward to attending this exhibition.
Since seeing it on Facebook I'd been looking forward to attending this exhibition.
Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings.
It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding re projection.
It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surround projection.
I'm unsure what you intend to say here. I guess it is a 'projection'.
It's really surprised me.
Consequently, I bought some merchandises, because their qualities arey is so good.
I bought some merchandise because the quality is so good.
'Consequently' is not a word that is used too often for casual speak. It has a slightly formal sound and fits well in a text book. A more natural phrasing when speaking or perhaps writing a journal entry would be 'So I bought some...' if you would like to state causation.
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Today I go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. Today I will go to the library as usual. |
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I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow.
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In the morning,we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''.
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It is a touching movie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nonetheless,I paid most of attention on the appearances of main-actor and main-actress.
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They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. They are so charming that I cannot stop looking at them.
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We visit Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch.
We visited the Top 100 greatest paintings exhibit |
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Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition.
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Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibit |
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Although I'm not familiar with arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. Although I'm not familiar with the arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. |
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It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding rejection.
It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surround I'm unsure what you intend to say here. I guess it is a 'projection'.
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It's really surprised me. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Consequently, I bought some merchandises, their qualities are so good.
'Consequently' is not a word that is used too often for casual speak. It has a slightly formal sound and fits well in a text book. A more natural phrasing when speaking or perhaps writing a journal entry would be 'So I bought some...' if you would like to state causation.
Consequently, I bought some merchandise |
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One day, I must see authentic work of these paintings! One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings! One day, I must see the authentic works of these paintings! |
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