March 24, 2026
いよいよロンドン市内見学 Explore London - Our Family Travelog #9
We had only four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go. We hadn’t had much time to research the city before our departure. We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but she was truly delighted to have the chance to see it.
ロンドン市内は４時間 どこを見て回るかは娘に任せていた。出発前にロンドンの下調べをするような時間があまりなかった。たまたまロンドン経由でプラハに行くことになったのだが、ロンドンを見学できることを娘はほんとうによろこんでいた。
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We had only four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go.
We hadidn’'t hadve much time to research the city before our departure.
We didn't have much time to research the city before our departure.
You could also say: "By the time we left / At the time of our departure, we hadn't researched the city very much yet."
Or: "We hadn't had much time to research the city when we left."
We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but she was truly delighted to have the chance to see it.
March 25, 2026
Thanks for the natural phrasing!
We had only had four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go.
We only had four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go.
Alternative expression. This is what I would say.
We hadn’t had much time to research the city before our departurewe left.
We hadn’t had much time to research the city before we left.
What you wrote is grammatical correct. Writing in the active voice (my phrase), as opposed to the passive voice (your phrase) improves readability.
We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but shemy daughter was truly delighted to have had the chance to see it.
We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but my daughter was truly delighted to have had the chance to see it.
March 25, 2026
Thank you for your corrections.
いよいよロンドン市内見学 Exploreing London - Our Family Travel Log #9
いよいよロンドン市内見学 Exploring London - Our Family Travel Log #9
We had only four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go.
We hadidn’t hadve much time to research the city before our departure.
We didn’t have much time to research the city before our departure.
Original is fine, but this feels a little more natural to me.
We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but she was truly delighted to have the chance to see it.
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Well written overall!
March 25, 2026
Thank you.
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いよいよロンドン市内見学 Explore London - Our Family Travelog #9
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We had only four hours to explore London, and I left it up to my daughter to decide where we would go. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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We hadn’t had much time to research the city before our departure.
We Original is fine, but this feels a little more natural to me.
We hadn’t had much time to research the city before What you wrote is grammatical correct. Writing in the active voice (my phrase), as opposed to the passive voice (your phrase) improves readability.
We You could also say: "By the time we left / At the time of our departure, we hadn't researched the city very much yet." Or: "We hadn't had much time to research the city when we left." |
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We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but she was truly delighted to have the chance to see it. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
We were simply passing through London on our way to Prague, but This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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