Distance is not any issue to communicate with each other as now we have the Iinternet. Distance is not an issue to communicate with each other as now we have the internet.

No need for capitalization of 'internet'.

Distance is not any issue to communicate with each other asion now we have the Internet. Distance is not an issue to communication now we have the Internet.

Sending doves as it was not so much time ago or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivion. Sending doves or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivion.

I would remove 'as it was not so much time ago', it's unneeded here

Sending doves as it was not so much timelong ago, or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivold fashioned. Sending doves as it was not so long ago, or even sending paper letters are old fashioned.

It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing. It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing.

It's all ways out of 'the' ordinary.

It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing. It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing.

Nonetheless, a great advancement in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one. Nonetheless, a great advancement in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one.

Noneevertheless, a great advances in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one. Nevertheless, great advances in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another.

This is especially certainevident regarding communication. This is especially evident regarding communication.

This is specially certaintrue regarding communication. This is specially true regarding communication.

There are tons of social media outsidesites/apps for you to discover. There are tons of social media sites/apps for you to discover.

'Outside' is unneeded. Outside of what? It's on/in a phone

There are tons of social media outsideapps for you to discover. There are tons of social media apps for you to discover.

Nonetheless, it is quite interesting that having all thoese so easinessesly accessible, we can still feel alone and forgotten. Nonetheless, it is quite interesting that having all these so easily accessible, we can still feel alone and forgotten.

'Easinesses' here doesn't work, I gave you an alternative way of saying it

Noneevertheless, it is quite interesting that while having all thoese easinessesmethods of communication, we can still feel alone and forgotten. Nevertheless, it is quite interesting that while having all these methods of communication, we can still feel alone and forgotten.

There was a piece of news that made an large impact on me. There was a piece of news that made a large impact on me.

I would say when this happened - such as recently, a long time ago Also maybe say 'a large impact'

There was some news that made an impact on me. There was some news that made an impact on me.

Or "a news article/report that"

An old man told said that he was more lonely than ever. An old man told said that he was more lonely than ever.

An old man tolsaid that he was more lonely than ever. An old man said that he was more lonely than ever.

"Told" is used if there is a person or object that is being told e.g. He told me So If you wanted to use "told" in this sentence you would say "He told the reporter/news outlet"

Now, with smartphones, there was no need for theirhis grandchildren to go toand visit him. Now, with smartphones, there was no need for his grandchildren to go and visit him.

You're talking about him, so use the correct pronoun - his

Now, with smartphones, there was no need for theirhis grandchildren (to go) to visit him. Now, with smartphones, there was no need for his grandchildren (to go) to visit him.

It isn't necessary to add "to go" in this sentence

He mentioned that there was a time when all of his family would gather and pay him a visit. He mentioned that there was a time when all of his family would gather and pay him a visit.

Development is growing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep ptracek of it. Development is growing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep track of it.

Development is growincreasing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep up with the pace of it. Development is increasing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep up with the pace of it.

"Development" is already a type of growth so it would be better to use a different word

Going against it would be a preposterous nonsense. Going against it would be preposterous nonsense.

Nonsense is uncountable so you do not need a defining article - a/the.

However, hwe should pay attention that our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time, are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel beloved and appreciated. However, we should pay attention that our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time, are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel loved and appreciated.

I think you meant to say 'we' instead of 'he'.

However, hwe should pay attention thato our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time,. We are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel beloved and appreciated. However, we should pay attention to our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time. We are at risk if we forget that close contact makes us feel beloved and appreciated.

Nowadays, young people are exposed to theseis media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any app than meeting in person. Nowadays, young people are exposed to this media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any app than meeting in person.

Nowadays, young people are exposed to these media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any apppps rather than meeting in person. Nowadays, young people are exposed to the media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through apps rather than meeting in person.

As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to thate anonymity the Iinternet offers. As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to the anonymity the internet offers.

As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to thate anonymity the Internet offers. As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to the anonymity the Internet offers.

We ought not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made. We ought not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made.

I would use - built, formed, or created instead of made since your piece of writing is rather academic, formal, and high level.

We oughmust not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made. We must not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made.

Nonetheless, do not trust on that way thatso easily; remember that human contact is psychologically a need. Nonetheless, do not trust that way so easily; remember that human contact is psychologically a need.

Noneevertheless, do not trust on that way that easiit completely; remember that human contact is a psychologically a need. Nevertheless, do not trust it completely; remember that human contact is a psychologically need.

Could you imagine your childhood without those hugs or those tender kisses from your beloved peopleones? Could you imagine your childhood without those hugs or those tender kisses from your loved ones?

Beloved is different from loved, this is also a collocation to say 'loved ones'.

Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you do not step ahead and cross thate technological gap. Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you do not step ahead and cross the technological gap.

Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you doid not step ahead and cross that technological gap. Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you did not step ahead and cross that technological gap.