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yui

May 25, 2020

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How To Stay My Quarantine

It’s been a few month since the quarantine starts, then the emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live is going to be released today.

I stayed with watching Netflix most of the time. I watched “Dead To Me” last week. It has the series 1 and 2. I finished watching both of them only for three days, times pass very quickly while watching it.

The content is little bit scarred, but it’s a thrilling story which can’t stop watching.
If you have any recommendation of movies or videos, please let me know for my next list.

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How To Staypend My Quarantine

It’s been a few months since the quarantine starts, thened, and now the emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live is going to be releaslifted today.

I stayed withpent quarantine watching Netflix most of the time.

I watched “Dead To Me” last week.

It has thewo series 1 and 2.

I finished watching both of them in only for three days, t. Times passed very quickly while I was watching it.

The content is a little bit scarredy, but it’s a thrilling story whichthat you can’t stop watching.

If you have any recommendations of movies or videos, please let me know for my next list.

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最近あんまり映画を見ていませんね…
んー何をおススメすればいいか分かりません。どんなジャンルが好きですか?

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yui

May 26, 2020

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ヒューマンドラマやラブサスペンスなどが好きです!
もし思いついたらまた教えてください^^

How To StayI Spent My Quarantine

'spend' is a very useful verb for talking about what you did during periods of time. For example, you could ask "How did you spend your weekend?" and this means "What did you do during the weekend?". So "How I spent my quarantine" is a natural way to say something that means "what I did while I had to stay home because of the quarantine".

I stayed with watching Netflix most of the timepent most of the time watching Netflix.

Other options are:
'I stayed home watching Netflix most of the time'
'I stayed home and watched Netflix most of the time'

I watched “Dead To Me” last week.

It has the series 1 and 2There are two seasons.

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Good job on this post and Happy End of Quarantine!

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May 26, 2020

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Thank you!!

How Tto Stay at Home: My Quarantine

I'm not sure what this means, so I guessed!

It’s been a few months since the quarantine starts, then ted. The emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live isn Tokyo going to be releaslifted today.

"starts" needs to be "started" to match the past tense "been". A declaration is "lifted" rather than released. I re-ordered the sentance to make it sound nicer :)

I stayed withinside watching Netflix most of the time.

I watched “Dead To Me” last week.

It has the2 series 1 and 2.

The "the" is unnecessary. You could also say "It has series 1 and 2", but it's quicker to say it just has "two" series, as that implies there must be a series 1 and 2. Another word for "series" in English is "season" - you often see "this show has two seasons".

I finished watching both of them in only for three days, t. Times passes very quickly while watching it.

The content is little bit scarredy, but it’s a thrilling story which you can’t stop watching.

I'm using the general "you" here, to mean "anyone", rather than a specific person. Like an ad for a TV show would say "you won't be able to stop watching". They're not referring to you specifically, but to a person in general.

If you have any recommendation of movies or video recommendations, please let me know for my next list.

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I have been watching a lot of TV too! My favorite TV shows at the moment are "Bob's Burgers" and "Nailed It". I don't think Bob's Burgers is on Netflix though :(

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yui

May 26, 2020

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Thank you for correcting and recommendations!
I found "Nailed It", but I couldn't find "Bob's Burgers" on Netflix. If I find it, I will try to watch it!

How To Stay My Quarantine


How Tto Stay at Home: My Quarantine

I'm not sure what this means, so I guessed!

How To StayI Spent My Quarantine

'spend' is a very useful verb for talking about what you did during periods of time. For example, you could ask "How did you spend your weekend?" and this means "What did you do during the weekend?". So "How I spent my quarantine" is a natural way to say something that means "what I did while I had to stay home because of the quarantine".

How To Staypend My Quarantine

It’s been a few month since the quarantine starts, then the emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live is going to be released today.


It’s been a few months since the quarantine starts, then ted. The emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live isn Tokyo going to be releaslifted today.

"starts" needs to be "started" to match the past tense "been". A declaration is "lifted" rather than released. I re-ordered the sentance to make it sound nicer :)

It’s been a few months since the quarantine starts, thened, and now the emergency declaration in Tokyo where I live is going to be releaslifted today.

I stayed with watching Netflix most of the time.


I stayed withinside watching Netflix most of the time.

I stayed with watching Netflix most of the timepent most of the time watching Netflix.

Other options are: 'I stayed home watching Netflix most of the time' 'I stayed home and watched Netflix most of the time'

I stayed withpent quarantine watching Netflix most of the time.

I watched “Dead To Me” last week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It has the series 1 and 2.


It has the2 series 1 and 2.

The "the" is unnecessary. You could also say "It has series 1 and 2", but it's quicker to say it just has "two" series, as that implies there must be a series 1 and 2. Another word for "series" in English is "season" - you often see "this show has two seasons".

It has the series 1 and 2There are two seasons.

It has thewo series 1 and 2.

I finished watching both of them only for three days, times pass very quickly while watching it.


I finished watching both of them in only for three days, t. Times passes very quickly while watching it.

I finished watching both of them in only for three days, t. Times passed very quickly while I was watching it.

The content is little bit scarred, but it’s a thrilling story which can’t stop watching.


The content is little bit scarredy, but it’s a thrilling story which you can’t stop watching.

I'm using the general "you" here, to mean "anyone", rather than a specific person. Like an ad for a TV show would say "you won't be able to stop watching". They're not referring to you specifically, but to a person in general.

The content is a little bit scarredy, but it’s a thrilling story whichthat you can’t stop watching.

If you have any recommendation of movies or videos, please let me know for my next list.


If you have any recommendation of movies or video recommendations, please let me know for my next list.

If you have any recommendations of movies or videos, please let me know for my next list.

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