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Nov. 19, 2023

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How to Spend a Weekend

It is difficult to spend a weekend in a meaningful way. We tend to kill time on scrolling social media and watching YouTube. I do not think that playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with it. It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into something. I would like to find some hobbies to be passionate about and lose track of time. I feel guilty about not studying English and doing strength training every weekend.
Today, I went to parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up tires. I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on the street. The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate the sandwich on the riverbed. I am content with today's activity even though it is far from being productive. I find that how to perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

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We tend to kill time onby scrolling through social media and watching YouTube.

Today, I went to my parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up the tires.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on the street.

The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate the sandwich on the riverbedank.

I find that how toI perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

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How to Spend a Weekends

It is difficult to spend a weekends in a meaningful way.

We tend to kill time onby scrolling social media and watching YouTube.

I do not think that doing things like playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with it.

It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into somethingenjoy their hobbies.

"Enjoy their hobbies" sounds better to me than "get into something."

I would like to find some hobbies to be passionate about and lose track of time.

I feel guilty about not studying English and doing strength training every weekend.

Today, I went to my parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up the tires.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on thefrom a street vendor.

The weather was nice this afternoon, so that I ate themy sandwich onutside by the riverbed.

"Riverbed" is the ground that a river flows over. I think you mean that you ate "by the river."

I a'm content with today's activitywhat I did today, even though it iI was far from being productive.

I find that how to perceiveI look at my everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

It is difficult to spend a weekend in's hard to have a meaningful way.eekend

We oftend to kill waste time on scrolling through social media and watching videos on YouTube.

I do not thinkn't believe that playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with itif it makes you happy.

It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into something's crucial for those individuals caught up in a hectic work schedule to break away from the strain of day-to-day life by engaging in leisure activities.

I would like to find some hobbies to be passionate about and lose track of time.

I feel guilty about for not studying English andor doing strength training every weekend.

Today, I went tovisited my parents' house to pick upcollect my cross bicyclke and pump upinflate the tiyres.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on thefrom a street vendor.

The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate themy sandwich on the riverbedank.

I am content with today's activity even though it is far from being productive.

I find that how toI perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

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i think it sounds more natural this way

I would like to find some hobbies to be passionate about and lose track of time.


I would like to find some hobbies to be passionate about and lose track of time.

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How to Spend a Weekend


How to Spend a Weekends

It is difficult to spend a weekend in a meaningful way.


It is difficult to spend a weekend in's hard to have a meaningful way.eekend

It is difficult to spend a weekends in a meaningful way.

We tend to kill time on scrolling social media and watching YouTube.


We oftend to kill waste time on scrolling through social media and watching videos on YouTube.

We tend to kill time onby scrolling social media and watching YouTube.

We tend to kill time onby scrolling through social media and watching YouTube.

I do not think that playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with it.


I do not thinkn't believe that playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with itif it makes you happy.

I do not think that doing things like playing games or reading comics is a waste of time as long as you are satisfied with it.

It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into something.


It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into something's crucial for those individuals caught up in a hectic work schedule to break away from the strain of day-to-day life by engaging in leisure activities.

It is important for those who are busy at work to get away from daily stress and get into somethingenjoy their hobbies.

"Enjoy their hobbies" sounds better to me than "get into something."

I feel guilty about not studying English and doing strength training every weekend.


I feel guilty about for not studying English andor doing strength training every weekend.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I went to parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up tires.


Today, I went tovisited my parents' house to pick upcollect my cross bicyclke and pump upinflate the tiyres.

Today, I went to my parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up the tires.

Today, I went to my parents' house to pick up my cross bicycle and pump up the tires.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on the street.


I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on thefrom a street vendor.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on thefrom a street vendor.

I enjoyed cycling and bought a fruits sandwich on the street.

The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate the sandwich on the riverbed.


The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate themy sandwich on the riverbedank.

The weather was nice this afternoon, so that I ate themy sandwich onutside by the riverbed.

"Riverbed" is the ground that a river flows over. I think you mean that you ate "by the river."

The weather was nice this afternoon so that I ate the sandwich on the riverbedank.

I am content with today's activity even though it is far from being productive.


I am content with today's activity even though it is far from being productive.

I a'm content with today's activitywhat I did today, even though it iI was far from being productive.

I find that how to perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.


I find that how toI perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

I find that how to perceiveI look at my everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

I find that how toI perceive everyday life is more important than what I accomplished today.

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