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TarYosh

April 10, 2023

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How to Make People Angry - 無残 / Brutality

To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush".
It's a simple technique where you crush a business card in the most brutal way possible just after receiving it.
The professor executes this technique hilariously, with a long pause.
The reaction from the host is also important.
She stares at him with a cold eye instead of laughing.
This kind of awkwardness reminds me of The Office UK.

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人の怒らせ方講座 「無惨」
https://youtu.be/N4jxkNM6_Os?t=46

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How to Make People Angry - 無残 / Brutality

To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush"."

It's a simple technique where you crush a business card in the most brutal way possible just after receiving it.

The professor executes this technique hilariously, with a long pause.

The reaction from the host is also important.

She stares at him with a cold eye instead of laughing.

This kind of awkwardness reminds me of The Office UK.

Check out the related link in the note section below.

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The actress who plays the host is very, very good. I think I laugh at her reactions more than the professor's. そして、今回も上手に書けています!

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TarYosh

April 13, 2023

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Thank you very much, mari-san!

To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush[ing]".

You're repeating yourself, choose "To begin with" or "I think I should start with". The quotation has to agree with the rest of our sentence, so I used the MLA way of modifying a quote.

It's a simple technique where you crush a business card in the most brutal way possible just after receiving it.

The professor executes this technique hilariously, with athe long pause furthers the hilarity.

"with a long pause" just hangs at the end, not saying how it plays into the technique.

The reaction from the host is also important.

She stares at him with a cold eyes instead of laughing.

This kind of awkwardness reminds me of The Office UK.

Check out the related link in the note section below.

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Thanks for sharing this funny technique.

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TarYosh

April 13, 2023

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Thank you very much for helpful corrections, trish77857! You should not try it, lol.

How to Make People Angry - 無残 / Brutality


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To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush".


To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush[ing]".

You're repeating yourself, choose "To begin with" or "I think I should start with". The quotation has to agree with the rest of our sentence, so I used the MLA way of modifying a quote.

To begin with, I think I should start with the most iconic and popular technique, 無残 (むざん), which is famous for "Card Crush"."

It's a simple technique where you crush a business card in the most brutal way possible just after receiving it.


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The professor executes this technique hilariously, with a long pause.


The professor executes this technique hilariously, with athe long pause furthers the hilarity.

"with a long pause" just hangs at the end, not saying how it plays into the technique.

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The reaction from the host is also important.


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She stares at him with a cold eye instead of laughing.


She stares at him with a cold eyes instead of laughing.

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This kind of awkwardness reminds me of The Office UK.


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Check out the related link in the note section below.


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