May 6, 2023
How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspicious
In this skit, two guys and their client start a meeting.
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously from beginning to end, while the other two don't seem to care.
He is on something for sure.
If I encountered a person like this, I would get scared instead of getting angry.
The skit video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DX9MYITMc9Q
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How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspiciously How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspiciously
We need an adverb to describe the verb "acting" so I edited it to "suspiciously."
In this skit, two guys and their client start a meeting.
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously from beginning to end, while the other two don't seem to care.
He is on something for sure.
If I encountered a person like this, I would get scared instead of getting angry.
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私も！とても変ですね。
そして、今回も上手に書けています！
In this skit, two guys and their client startbegin a meeting.
In this skit, two guys and their client begin a meeting.
This is purely personal preference, start is also fine
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously from beginning to end, whilethe whole time, and the other two don't seem to care.
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously the whole time, and the other two don't seem to care.
“From beginning to end” isn't used that often as a phrase and “the whole time” tends to sound a bit more natural. The second part of this sentence is a bit confusing; you say the other men “don't seem to care” but it's not clear what that means in this context. What don't they care about? (I'm assuming it's this man’s suspiciousness.) If they don't care, who is being made angry (as referenced in the title)? If you tell me what specifically you think they are thinking/feeling I could suggest a better phrase.
He is on something for sure. He is on something for sure.
Just to ensure you understand the connotation, “on something” = using drugs
If I encountered a person like this, I would get scared instead of getting angry.
May 6, 2023
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously from beginning to end, whilethe whole time, and the other two don't seem to care.
“From beginning to end” isn't used that often as a phrase and “the whole time” tends to sound a bit more natural. The second part of this sentence is a bit confusing; you say the other men “don't seem to care” but it's not clear what that means in this context. What don't they care about? (I'm assuming it's this man’s suspiciousness.) If they don't care, who is being made angry (as referenced in the title)? If you tell me what specifically you think they are thinking/feeling I could suggest a better phrase.
Thank you for your helpful corrections, 24karitz!
This is the skit from the series called "How to Make People Angry," and this "きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspicious" is one of techniques. Targets of techniques don't get angry sometimes in this series.
In this skit, the user of the technique acts so suspiciously , but the other two proceeds their conversation as if nothing is happening.
May 6, 2023
Ok! So here instead of “don’t care”, I would say something like “the other two ignore his strange behavior.” It’s more descriptive and removed ambiguity surrounding what it means to “not care” in this context.
May 6, 2023
Ok! So here instead of “don’t care”, I would say something like “the other two ignore his strange behavior.” It’s more descriptive and removed ambiguity surrounding what it means to “not care” in this context.
Thanks again, 24karitz! It's really helpful.
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How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspicious How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspiciously How to Make People Angry - きょどりすぎ / Acting Too Suspiciously We need an adverb to describe the verb "acting" so I edited it to "suspiciously." |
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In this skit, two guys and their client start a meeting.
In this skit, two guys and their client This is purely personal preference, start is also fine This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously from beginning to end, while the other two don't seem to care.
As the title suggests, one of the men behaves suspiciously “From beginning to end” isn't used that often as a phrase and “the whole time” tends to sound a bit more natural. The second part of this sentence is a bit confusing; you say the other men “don't seem to care” but it's not clear what that means in this context. What don't they care about? (I'm assuming it's this man’s suspiciousness.) If they don't care, who is being made angry (as referenced in the title)? If you tell me what specifically you think they are thinking/feeling I could suggest a better phrase. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is on something for sure. He is on something for sure. He is on something for sure. Just to ensure you understand the connotation, “on something” = using drugs This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I encountered a person like this, I would get scared instead of getting angry.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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