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YorionDawnium

Nov. 3, 2025

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How to Keep Egnergetic?

I always stay in a model of energy saving but I am admire the high energy people .By the way I having been suffer headache about a week,my mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it at once so I feel headache...is that right?

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How to KeepStay Egnergetic?

I always stay in a model of energy saving mode but I am admire the high energy people people with a lot of energy.

By the way, I having been suffering from headaches for about a week, my mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot acceptprocess it all at once so I feelget headaches...

is that righttrue?

In my opinion "right" sounds fine, but true is more correct technically

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I hope you're headaches get better! Personally I've never gotten headaches from learning too much, I just get tired. If it doesn't stop I'd recommend visiting a doctor to be safe.

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YorionDawnium

yesterday

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Thank you for your advice.Your recommands are extremely valuable!

How to Keep Myself Egnergetic?

I always stay in a model of energy savingtry to spare my energy, but I amdo admire the high energy people people with a lot of energy.

By the way, I havinge been suffering headaches for about a week,m. My mom said that it's because I'm embracing a lots of new things, and my brain cannot accept it all at once so I feel, which results in my headache...s…

This needed splitting and slight rephrasing.

iIs that righcorrect?

Other people have already written about "right" versus "true", but I think "correct" suits this better.

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Tackling a lot of things all at once can feel overwhelming at times, indeed. Eventually, you get used to it. Get plenty of rest, and I hope you feel better soon.

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YorionDawnium

yesterday

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Thank you!

How to Keep (keep being OR keep myself) Egnergetic?

I always stay in a modelsort of energy saving mode, but I am admire the high energy people .

Careful here. Energy saving mode isn't really something we say when we talk about people. Usually means something akin to energy saving mode on a phone or a laptop.

You could still say it though. It could come off as clever and funny potentially.

By the way, I having been suffering a headache for about a week,m. My mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it all at once (so I feel headache...).

Better omit the last part as it's a bit repetitive.
Also, the sentence is a bit too long. Better to split it in two.

iIs that right?

Maybe "Do you think that's true?" would sound better. Grammatically fine as it is.

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Good job.
Hope the headache gets better. :)

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YorionDawnium

yesterday

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Thank you!o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ

How to Keep Egnergetic?

Alternative Title:
→ How to Stay Active Throughout The Day?

I have always stay in a model ofbelieved in energy saving, but I am admire the highly energyetic people .

- Always remember to add a comma behind "but" when you have different subjects (the thing or person in the phrase) in the sentence.

By the way, I havinge been suffergetting headache about as this past week,m. My mom said that's because I'm embracingoverwhelming myself with lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it at once so I feel headache..take it all in at once.

iIs that righttrue?

The difference between "right" and "true":
1. "Right" means something to be correct. It is the opposite of "wrong."
2. "True" means that something is a proven fact. It is the opposite of "false".

Even though both of them are technically the same, using "true" in this context is preferred.

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Keep writing and have a good rest :)

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YorionDawnium

yesterday

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Thank you!(●'◡'●)

How to Keep Egnergetic?


How to Keep Egnergetic?

Alternative Title: → How to Stay Active Throughout The Day?

How to Keep (keep being OR keep myself) Egnergetic?

How to Keep Myself Egnergetic?

How to KeepStay Egnergetic?

I always stay in a model of energy saving but I am admire the high energy people .


I have always stay in a model ofbelieved in energy saving, but I am admire the highly energyetic people .

- Always remember to add a comma behind "but" when you have different subjects (the thing or person in the phrase) in the sentence.

I always stay in a modelsort of energy saving mode, but I am admire the high energy people .

Careful here. Energy saving mode isn't really something we say when we talk about people. Usually means something akin to energy saving mode on a phone or a laptop. You could still say it though. It could come off as clever and funny potentially.

I always stay in a model of energy savingtry to spare my energy, but I amdo admire the high energy people people with a lot of energy.

I always stay in a model of energy saving mode but I am admire the high energy people people with a lot of energy.

By the way I having been suffer headache about a week,my mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it at once so I feel headache...


By the way, I havinge been suffergetting headache about as this past week,m. My mom said that's because I'm embracingoverwhelming myself with lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it at once so I feel headache..take it all in at once.

By the way, I having been suffering a headache for about a week,m. My mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot accept it all at once (so I feel headache...).

Better omit the last part as it's a bit repetitive. Also, the sentence is a bit too long. Better to split it in two.

By the way, I havinge been suffering headaches for about a week,m. My mom said that it's because I'm embracing a lots of new things, and my brain cannot accept it all at once so I feel, which results in my headache...s…

This needed splitting and slight rephrasing.

By the way, I having been suffering from headaches for about a week, my mom said that's because I'm embracing lots of new things and my brain cannot acceptprocess it all at once so I feelget headaches...

is that right?


iIs that righttrue?

The difference between "right" and "true": 1. "Right" means something to be correct. It is the opposite of "wrong." 2. "True" means that something is a proven fact. It is the opposite of "false". Even though both of them are technically the same, using "true" in this context is preferred.

iIs that right?

Maybe "Do you think that's true?" would sound better. Grammatically fine as it is.

iIs that righcorrect?

Other people have already written about "right" versus "true", but I think "correct" suits this better.

is that righttrue?

In my opinion "right" sounds fine, but true is more correct technically

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