Those odays I have takingdid several interviews to, so I can find a job in 2024.

did/have is often used more than taken for interviews.

But ithey did non't goes well.

Be careful with tense, it's unclear whether you're speaking in present tense, or if all the events have already occurred.

I've summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills.

"skills" more commonly used than "a skill"

I could noan't get my content well organized.

Once again, unclear if this is present tense, or if you're talking about a specific event in the past. If past tense, "Firstly, I have bad communication skills. I could not get my content well organized in the interview."

They aAll my talking points were mixed together, thatwhich makes my audiences feel difficultit difficult for my audience to understand from a mass.

What is "they"? Content is usually not referred to as "they"

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

So, when askedI was asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

I must changneed to improve, or I may loste my job and have no pay atin 2024.

"must change" is very strong, and a bit vague.

ToFor the first problem, I determine towill slow down my talking speed,; that would help me to buy some time to get content organizedill give me time to organize my content.

"determine" is rarely used in first-person present tense. Semicolon to combine two linked sentences. Second half is quite long, can be shortened.

Andlso, I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybegrammar practice. Perhaps I should take some writing classes.

what was meant by "logistic", doesn't make sense in the context of the sentence. The whole phrase is cleaner as two sentences.

ToFor the second problem, maybe I should do some summarize!summarise my content!

Thoese days, I have been taking severalmany interviews to find a job in 2024.

But ithey did not goes well.

I summarized the list of reasons why I have failed in those interviews.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills.

They are mixed together, thatand this makess my audiences feel difficultakes it difficult for my audience to understand from a mass.

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

So, when askedthey asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

I must change, or I may loste my job and have no pay atin 2024.

To address the first problem, I determine towill slow down my talking speed, that wouldo help me to buy some time to get content organized.

Andt the same time, I should do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, maybe I shoulds, maybe even take some writing classes.

To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarizeation!

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But it didIt has not gones well.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills.

They areMy content was mixed together, that makes my audiences feelwhich made it difficult to understand from a massor my audience.

I might suggest using "disorganized" rather than "mixed together". "Mixed together" doesn't always imply something being difficult to understand.

Secondly, I haven’t arranged my past work well.

So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

I must change, or I may lost mynot get a job and have no pay atin 2024.

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And I should also do some deliberate practice on logistic, at the same time, ms. Maybe I should take some writing classes at the same time.

To the second problem, maybe I should do some summarizes!

Those days I haveI am takingen several interviews to find afor jobs in 2024.

"Those days" is for days long gone.
"These days" is for the now.
Ultimately, it was hard to tell if you have upcoming interviews so I opted to cut the phrase entirely.

"Find a job" is typically reserved for the pre-interview job search which includes activities like reading job listings and contacting industry friends. By the time you're interviewing, you've already "found" the job, you just need to secure it.

But it did not goes well.

Firstly, I have a bad communication skills.

TheyVarious parts are mixed together, that makes my audiences feelind it difficult to understand from a massthem as a whole.

"Difficult" isn't a feeling, but "find it" has maybe that sort of meaning in a sense.

So, when asked about my job experience, my performance was a disaster.

When "asked" takes a direct object, it's a person, like in "Tom asked Marry." Thus we need a preposition like "about" to describe the topic of the question.

I must change, or I may loste my job and have no pay at all in 2024.

To the first problem, I determine tomust slow down my talking speed, that would help me to buy some time to get my content organized.

And I should do some deliberate practice on logistic(?), at the same time, maybe I should take some writing classes.

"logistic" seems wrong, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say.

Do you have any other ideas on this questionproblem?

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