Nov. 8, 2020
I watched a Youtube video yesterday. The youtuber was talking how to get better mentally. People who are mentally tired tend to use negative expressions. Or using negative expressions frequently may cause mentally trouble to them. He suggested us based on some studies.
Remember five negative words that you often use, and say them in other positive words. Any word has both positive and negative aspects. Focus on thinking of positive words.
It sounds common, but I think it's a good way to be healthy.
昨日、あるYoutubeの動画を見ました。落ち込んだ気持ちから抜け出す方法について彼は話しました。精神的に疲れている人は、ネガティブな言葉をよく使います。頻繁にネガティブな言葉を使うことが精神的な落ち込みを引き起こしているのかもしれない。彼はいつくつかの研究を引用して提案をしました。
ネガティブな口癖を5つ思い浮かべてください。どんな言葉にもポジティブな面とネガティブな面があります。その口癖をポジティブな表現に言い換えてみましょう。
ありふれたアドバイスかもしれませんが、私は心を健康に保ついい方法だと思いました。
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It sounds common, but I think it's a good way to be healthy.
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Titles in English should start with a capital letter.
I watched a Youtube video yesterday.
I would personally put "Yesterday" at the beginning of the sentence, but the way you did it is fine too.
The youtuber was talking about how to get better mentallyimprove one's mental health.
The word "about" is necessary here if you want to use the verb "talking". However, you can replace "talking about" with "discussing" which is what I would do, but either way is correct.
People who are mentally tired tend to use negative expressions.
It's grammatically correct, but I'm not sure what "mentally tired" here is supposed to express. It sounds like the point is to express a negative state of mind (pessimism) from the other sentences, but "mentally tired" in English sounds like you're saying someone who is tired after a long period of mental activity like thinking.
Or using negative expressions frequently may cause mentally trouble to them.
You should not start sentences in English with conjunctions like "or". However, you could write something like this: "That, or using negative expressions frequently may cause mental trouble to them".
He suggested us based on some studies.
If you write "He suggested us", you need to follow it up with a noun describing what he suggested. e.g. He suggested us a bit of advice based on some studies
Remember five negative words that you use often use, and sayreplace them inwith other positive words.
Any word has both positive and negative aspects.
Focus on thinking of positive words.
It sounds commonsimple, but I think it's a good way to bestay healthy.
"Common" is just a word that indicates the frequency of something usually without any relation to its quality. The word I would use here is "simple", or "plain". Also "be healthy" sounds more natural in English.
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Keep up the good work.
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The youtuber was talking about how to get better mentally.
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You can also combine this sentence with the one before it to say: "People who are mentally tired tend to use negative expressions, or using negative expressions frequently may cause mental problems for them".
Remember five negative words that you use often use, and say them in other positive words.
Your original sentence is grammatically correct, but saying "you use often" sounds more natural.
Any word has both positive and negative aspects.
Focus on thinking of positive words.
It sounds common, but I think it's a good way to be healthy.
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