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lendz

July 17, 2024

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How to cook instant noodles (17/07/2024)

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections

I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express the right way. For example, they could read newspapers very well and listen to audios as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes or how to cook instant noodles" they could not express well.

To avoid that, I will write an article about “how to cook instant noodles”

Step one, you have to go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it

Step two, to make good progress you must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction on. You have to wait until the water is boiled.

Step four, tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl. When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

Step five, use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes. After that, you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

Thank you for reading.

I am not good at adverbs and phrasal verbs to write better, please give me some suggestions

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How to cook instant noodles (17/07/2024)

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams
, but in everyday situations, they do not express themselves the right way.

For example, they couldan read newspapers very well and listen tocomprehend audios as well, but when I asked them "howthey are asked "how do you to tie your shoes?" or "how todo you cook instant noodles?" they could not express wellan't give suitable answers.

To avoid that, I will write an article about “how to cook instant noodles”


Step one
, you have to g: Go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it


Step two
, t: To make good progress you must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

When giving instructions, you can just start the phrase with the verb

Step three, you will p: Pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the inductionstove on.

You have to wait until the water is boileding.

Step four, t: Tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.

When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction, turn the stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

You don't have to specify that it's an induction stove each time, so you can just say "stove". It isn't wrong either way though!

Step five, u: Use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.

After that, you willcan uncover the bowl and enjoy ityour noodles.

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

Thank you for reading.

I am not good at adverbs and phrasal verbs to write better, p. Please give me some suggestions to write better.

I didn't notice any major issues with your use of adverbs to be honest. Most of the grammar errors were just verbs that could have been removed since you were giving instructions.

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Very well done!

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lendz

July 18, 2024

3

Thank you very much 😍

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express
things the right way.

This is my first time correcting anything, so apologies if I do it wrong! Instead of "the right way" you could also say "correctly" - this is more formal.

For example, they couldan read newspapers very well and listen to audiopodcasts as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes" or "how to cook instant noodles" they could noan't express themselves well.

Just "audios" is a little odd to say, even though it's obvous what you mean. I'd list examples (podcasts, music, the radio), or just say "listen to things".

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction stove on.

Step four, tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put ithem into the bowl.

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

Removing the "will" sounds more natural.

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Your idea of focusing on everyday situations is good! Good job.

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lendz

July 18, 2024

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Thank you very much 😍

How to cook instant noodles (17/07/2024)

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus
es on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express the right way.

You're welcome 😄

For example, they could read newspapers very well and listen to audios as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes" or "how to cook instant noodles" they could not express it well.

To avoid that, I will write an article about “how to cook instant noodles” Step one, you have to go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it Step two, to make good progress you must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction stove on.

You have to wait until the water is boiled.

Step four, tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.

When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

Step five, use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.

After that, you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

Thank you for reading.

I am not good at adverbs and phrasal verbs to write better, please give me some suggestions

lendz's avatar
lendz

July 18, 2024

3

Thank you very much 😍

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for all of your golden corrections

! I heard someonebody on Youtube say that most people in my country justonly focus on practicing for exams, but in everyday situations, they do not express their themselves the right way.

You're welcome!

F.A.N.B.O.Y.S always have commas.
https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/commas/#:~:text=You%20should%20always%20have%20a,clauses%20separated%20by%20comma%20%2B%20FANBOYS.

For example, they could read newspapers very well and can listen to audios as well, but when I asked them "how todo you tie your shoes," or "how todo you cook instant noodles" they could not express that well.

To avoid that, I will write an article abouton “how to cook instant noodles” ¶
.”¶

Step one
, y: You have to go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it ¶

Step two, to make good progress y
nstant noodles.¶

Step two: Y
ou must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

When giving instruction in the second person, we usually use colons (:).

Step three, y: You will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the inductionheat on.

You have to wWait until the water is boiled.

Step four, t: Tear the instant noodle packages and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.

Step five: When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

Step five, usix: Use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.

After that, you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

I certainly will!

Thank you for reading.

You're welcome!

I am not good atwith adverbs and phrasal verbs when used to write better, p/ Please give me some suggestions

Neither am I! You just pick it up because there are so many cases. A lot of them are interchangeable depending on context, but some just sound better.

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Once again, great writing!

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lendz

July 17, 2024

3

I mean, In the above article, can you add some adverbs to make it better?

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lendz

July 17, 2024

3

Thank you for all of your corrections 😍

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milky

July 18, 2024

0

No! It sounds perfect. When writing instruction (using the second person point of view) simple is better when the detail is there.

How to cook instant noodles (17/07/2024)


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First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express the right way.


First of all, I would like to thank you guys for all of your golden corrections

! I heard someonebody on Youtube say that most people in my country justonly focus on practicing for exams, but in everyday situations, they do not express their themselves the right way.

You're welcome! F.A.N.B.O.Y.S always have commas. https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/commas/#:~:text=You%20should%20always%20have%20a,clauses%20separated%20by%20comma%20%2B%20FANBOYS.

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus
es on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express the right way.

You're welcome 😄

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams but in everyday situations, they do not express
things the right way.

This is my first time correcting anything, so apologies if I do it wrong! Instead of "the right way" you could also say "correctly" - this is more formal.

First of all, I would like to thank you guys for your golden corrections


I heard someone on Youtube say that most people in my country just focus on practicing for exams
, but in everyday situations, they do not express themselves the right way.

For example, they could read newspapers very well and listen to audios as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes or how to cook instant" they could not express well.


To avoid that, I will write an article about “how to cook instant noodles” Step one, you have to go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it Step two, to make good progress you must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.


To avoid that, I will write an article abouton “how to cook instant noodles” ¶
.”¶

Step one
, y: You have to go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it ¶

Step two, to make good progress y
nstant noodles.¶

Step two: Y
ou must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

When giving instruction in the second person, we usually use colons (:).

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To avoid that, I will write an article about “how to cook instant noodles”


Step one
, you have to g: Go to the supermarket, grocery store or food store to buy it


Step two
, t: To make good progress you must prepare a pot, a bowl, an induction stove, a plate, chopsticks and a spoon.

When giving instructions, you can just start the phrase with the verb

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction on.


Step three, y: You will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the inductionheat on.

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction stove on.

Step three, you will pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the induction stove on.

Step three, you will p: Pour two cups of water into the pot and turn the inductionstove on.

You have to wait until the water is boiled.


You have to wWait until the water is boiled.

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You have to wait until the water is boileding.

Step four, tear the instant noodle packet off and put it into the bowl.


When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction stove off and pour the water into the bowl.


Step five: When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When the water is boiling you have to turn the induction, turn the stove off and pour the water into the bowl.

You don't have to specify that it's an induction stove each time, so you can just say "stove". It isn't wrong either way though!

Step five, use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.


Step five, usix: Use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Step five, u: Use the plate to cover the bowl up and wait for three minutes.

After that you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.


I hope you will enjoy your meal.


I hope you will enjoy your meal.

I certainly will!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope you will enjoy your meal.

Removing the "will" sounds more natural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for reading.


Thank you for reading.

You're welcome!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am not good at adverbs and phrasal verbs to write better, please give me some suggestions


I am not good atwith adverbs and phrasal verbs when used to write better, p/ Please give me some suggestions

Neither am I! You just pick it up because there are so many cases. A lot of them are interchangeable depending on context, but some just sound better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am not good at adverbs and phrasal verbs to write better, p. Please give me some suggestions to write better.

I didn't notice any major issues with your use of adverbs to be honest. Most of the grammar errors were just verbs that could have been removed since you were giving instructions.

For example, they could read newspapers very well and listen to audios as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes or how to cook instant noodles" they could not express well.


For example, they could read newspapers very well and can listen to audios as well, but when I asked them "how todo you tie your shoes," or "how todo you cook instant noodles" they could not express that well.

For example, they could read newspapers very well and listen to audios as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes" or "how to cook instant noodles" they could not express it well.

For example, they couldan read newspapers very well and listen to audiopodcasts as well but when I asked them "how to tie your shoes" or "how to cook instant noodles" they could noan't express themselves well.

Just "audios" is a little odd to say, even though it's obvous what you mean. I'd list examples (podcasts, music, the radio), or just say "listen to things".

For example, they couldan read newspapers very well and listen tocomprehend audios as well, but when I asked them "howthey are asked "how do you to tie your shoes?" or "how todo you cook instant noodles?" they could not express wellan't give suitable answers.

Step four, tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.


Step four, t: Tear the instant noodle packages and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Step four, tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put ithem into the bowl.

Step four, t: Tear the instant noodle package and seasoning packages off and put it into the bowl.

After that, you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.


After that, you will uncover the bowl and enjoy it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, you willcan uncover the bowl and enjoy ityour noodles.

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