I just practiced climbing once last year at the University but I'm nodon't practicinge often now.

or: but I'm not practicing anymore.

However, I listened to a report about an hospital in Portugal where patients can climb.

She has been climbed for 15 years and she's also a medicinedoctor.

She suggested this idea because climbing is really helpfull and haves bags of mental and physical benefits.

In the report, we heard a story about a dancer who dihad a surgery in order to improve hiser health because I think she had difficulties to breatheing.

A surgeon *does* a surgery. A patient *has* a surgery (or *undergoes* a surgery).

But, sadly, the surgery had very bad consequences and and she had to be in wa wheelchair.

Since thisat day, she never has danced again.

There was also a man who fell because of his mate who let go the scaffauolding.

Consequently, he had a head trauma because his skull bone was broken.

Grammatical okay, but more normal to say, "he broke his skull."

However, with the help of the hospital and the woman, they did climbing and the dancer was really happy because she could dance again, but now ion a wall.

The man had also improvinged his strength and became able to do a lot of things that he couldn't do before.

To conclude, I think climbing is an inspiring discipline and it can be considered as a metaphor of life because life is not straight and sometimes, you can have to take difficult roads that challenge you (or "... difficult roads and to challenge yourself").

Life is constituted of ups and danwowns but you have always have to keep at it and always try to grind because it is worth the cost.

Moreover, if you have advice, feel free to tell it me!

Or: tell it to me.

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Is the dancer a man or woman? You use different gendered pronouns, so it is unclear. Change the gender of the pronouns so it is consistent. You used "she" in this sentence, and "his" in the previous sentence.

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