May 20, 2025
How to choose your job?
It is a real problem to find your own way. Children need to make a choice when they are too young. We don’t have special programs that can help our children to make a choice.
I think that we need to create programs that can help our children to understand what they want to do in future and what they are interested in.
Some people really spend a lot of time trying to find themselves. Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after several years at the university. After that they need to start their education again and it is the best way. Some of people stop their education at all and don’t start new one. In this case they just lose their years at the university without result.
How todo you choose your job?
"How to choose your job" implies an instruction, while the "?" changes that to a question. It might be better to word this as "How do you choose your job?" Or "How do children choose their jobs?" depending on your intention.
It is a real problem to find your own way.
It might feel more natural to say "It is really difficult to find your own way", or "It is a real problem finding your own way".
Children needhave to make a choice/decision (about what they want to do in the future) when they are too young.
It feels more natural to use "decision" here rather than "choice", as "choice" in this case feels more like picking between set options, while "decision" feels like it implies a larger, broader and less clear. "Choice" can definitely still work though, especially if you clarify your topic more.
Otherwise, for clarity of what you are talking about you could include what I have written in ().
We don’t have special programs that can help our children to make a choicedecision.
I think that we need to create programs that can help our children to understand what they want to do in the future and what they are interested in.
Some people really spend a lot of time trying to find themselves.
The placement of "really" here doesn't feel right, and if you want to emphasise the amount of time it takes, it might be more natural to also say something like "Some people spend a really long time trying to find themselves."
Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after spending several years at the university.
I think it sounds a bit more natural to include "spending", however it still makes sense without this.
After that they need to start their education again and ithis is the best way.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean here. Do you mean starting their education again is the best way for them to decide what they want to do, or choose a job?
Depending on your meaning you could word it like "After this they would/might/could start their education again, and this is the best way (for them to decide what they want to do/for them to choose a job)."
(I gave different words and extra clarification for different ways you could word this depending on your meaning)
Some of people stop their education at allcompletely and don’t start new oneagain.
Could also put something like "don't start a new path", or "don't start again in a new direction".
In thissuch cases they just lose their years at the university without any results (to come from it).
Could also say "they just lose their years at university without gaining anything from it", or even potentially "they just waste their years at university" if you want to be much harsher.
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Great job! This is overall easy to understand with just a few simple changes mainly to potentially make it feel more natural. I also agree, it is really difficult when you are younger to know what path to take especially when you are expected to make choices for what you want to do when you are so young.
Its is at really a problem to find your own way.?
Children need to make a choices when they are too young.
We don’t have special programs that can help our children to make a choices.
I think that we need to create programs that can help our children to understand what they want to do in the future and what they are interested in.
Some people really spend a lot of time trying to find themselves.
Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after several years at theof university.
After that, they need to start their education again and it is the best way.
Some of people stop their education at all and don’t start new one.again.
In thisat case, they just lose their years at the university without results.
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How to choose your job? How "How to choose your job" implies an instruction, while the "?" changes that to a question. It might be better to word this as "How do you choose your job?" Or "How do children choose their jobs?" depending on your intention. |
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It is a real problem to find your own way. I It is a real problem to find your own way. It might feel more natural to say "It is really difficult to find your own way", or "It is a real problem finding your own way". |
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Children need to make a choice when they are too young. Children need to make Children It feels more natural to use "decision" here rather than "choice", as "choice" in this case feels more like picking between set options, while "decision" feels like it implies a larger, broader and less clear. "Choice" can definitely still work though, especially if you clarify your topic more. Otherwise, for clarity of what you are talking about you could include what I have written in (). |
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I think that we need to create programs that can help our children to understand what they want to do in future and what they are interested in. I think that we need to create programs that can help our children to understand what they want to do in the future and what they are interested in. I think |
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Some people really spend a lot of time trying to find themselves. Some people Some people The placement of "really" here doesn't feel right, and if you want to emphasise the amount of time it takes, it might be more natural to also say something like "Some people spend a really long time trying to find themselves." |
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Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after several years at the university. Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after several years Students understand who they are and who they want to be only after spending several years at I think it sounds a bit more natural to include "spending", however it still makes sense without this. |
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After that they need to start their education again and it is the best way. After that, they need to start their education again After that they need to start their education again and I'm not entirely sure what you mean here. Do you mean starting their education again is the best way for them to decide what they want to do, or choose a job? Depending on your meaning you could word it like "After this they would/might/could start their education again, and this is the best way (for them to decide what they want to do/for them to choose a job)." (I gave different words and extra clarification for different ways you could word this depending on your meaning) |
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Some of people stop their education at all and don’t start new one. Some Some Could also put something like "don't start a new path", or "don't start again in a new direction". |
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In this case they just lose their years at the university without result. In th In Could also say "they just lose their years at university without gaining anything from it", or even potentially "they just waste their years at university" if you want to be much harsher. |
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