July 5, 2025
How to be rich
It would a long paragraph. If you'd like, you can leave a comment on how to sounds more natural.
I don't know, because I'm broke asf XD
But I don't one of the important things is that save some money first.
If you don't have any money, you gotta get into dangerous situration.
You might fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress.
You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what if...
Covid is coming back again, wars everywhere around the world.
The stocks are drop, Dollar is losing its value, everything is cost more.
(which words or phrases are better than "losing its value")
What if you lose your job?
How about the food, your rent, your family?
2008, Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs lost.
2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs are lost in US, in the world is 255 million jobs
Oil Price Crash, 1 million jobs lost.
2022, Russian-Ukraine War, 7 milliion jobs.
Global Tech Layoffs, 500,000 jobs by covid, AI (only tech)
Trump vs. immigran, leading to many strikes in the U.S.
I did not including Gaza- Israel, China - Taiwan - Australia.
The Glabal Fianancial Crisis was ended, the Covid was ended.
Still now, dollar drop ~11% in the last 6 months.
Car Insurance - 7%
Eggs increased 42% in the previous 12 months.
Housing increased 9% in major city, up nearly 50% over last year.
So many more etc.
Near future, Ai will replaced up to 375 million workers (around 14% of global).
More than 75% of American won't afford a $300K home.
Over 40 million Americans continue to reply on food stamp or banks.
....
So yes, the future will have a lot more.
Everything will be harder.
But what we can do?
There's a ton of things we need to do.
But right now, focus on saving money.
Because if you don't have the money, if the world will in difficult again (could you please help me finding words replace to "difficult")
All the things that I said will happen to you.
If you get stress, get into debt. Trust me, your life is even worse.
By the U.S. Federal Reserve, saving at least 3-6 months of living expenses.
If you're a freelancer, it should be 12 months.
ItThis would be a long paragraph.
If you'd like, you can leave a comment on how to make it sounds more natural.
I don't know, because I'm broke asf XD
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If you don't have any money, you're gottnna get into dangerous situration.
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"gotta" is short for "got to" or "have to", so it implies an obligation more than something that is likely to happen.
You might be fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress.
You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what ifs going to happen...
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The sStocks are drop, Dping, the dollar is losing its value, everything is costing more.
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What if you lose your job?
"losing its value" is actually probably the best phrase for a currency.
How about the food, your rent, your family?
2008, Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs lost.
This is not a full grammatically correct sentence, but it is something people might say (especially if trying to emphasise a point in a speech) so I won't change it.
2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs are lost in US, in the world is 255 million jobs
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Oil Price Crash, 1 million jobs lost.
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Global Tech Layoffs, 500,000 jobs bylost from covid, AI (only tech)
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I did not including Gaza- Israel, China - -Taiwan (- Australia?).
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The Glaobal Fianancial Crisis was ended, the Covid was ended.
Still now,Despite that, the dollar dropped ~11% in the last 6 months.
Car Insurance - 7%
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Eggs increased 42% in the previous 12 months.
Housing costs increased 9% in major cityies, up nearly 50% over last year.
Are they up 9% or 50%? It's not clear
So many more etc.
"so many more" and "etc" both basically say the same time so you can remove the etc
NIn the near future, AiI will replaced up to 375 million workers (around 14% of global workers).
Even in very casual speech, AI is still an acronym so should be capitalised.
More than 75% of American won't be able to afford a $300K home.
Over 40 million Americans continue to reply on food stamps or banks.
So yes, the future will have a lot more (... what?).
You need to specify what the future will have more of here.
But right now, focus on saving money.
Because if you don't have the money, if the world will inbecomes difficult again (could you please help me finding words replace to "difficult")
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All the things that I said will happen to you.
"challenging" might a word you can use, other than that it's going to be context-dependent.
If you get stressed, get into debt.
Trust me, your life iswill be even worse.
Since this is a prediction, it's better to use the future tense.
ByAccording to the U.S. Federal Reserve, savingyou should save at least 3-6 months of living expenses.
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One general comment, the tone of this piece is a bit mixed, it starts off very casual, like you might use in a spoken conversation with friends (and only some groups will ever speak that casually), but then it gets more formal when it comes to citing sources and giving precise numeric estimates. I started off trying not to make the tone too formal in correcting it, but a lot of the omissions and the heavy use of partial sentences are only valid in speech and so when I got to the end I wondered if I should have been stricter correcting things at the beginning because the piece was getting more formal.
July 7, 2025
Yes the tone of this is weird for me, I was just casually trying to write my thought but then I didn't know any outside the world, I took resources from ChatGPT without noticing about the tone.
Thanks for let me know.
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You might get fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress.
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"everything is costing more"
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(which words or phrases are better than "losing its value")
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How about thewill you buy food, pay your rent, and care for your family?
the extra verbs help clarity, although I can easily imagine people asking what you said in your initial sentence
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Everything will be harder.
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Trust me, your life is even worse.
ByPer the U.S. Federal Reserve, people should be saving at least 3-6 months of living expenses.
If you're a freelancer, it should be 12 months.
Feedback
Nice job overall, I think your spelling and clarity of ideas are there, the main area seems to be with sentence construction.
July 6, 2025
Thanks, my grammar, word order is bad :D
I'm still trying.
July 6, 2025
Trying is how we get better!
How to be rich
It would's going to be a long paragraph.
If you'd like, you can leave a comment on how to sounds more natural.
I don't know, because I'm broke asf XD
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But I don't know one of the important things is thato save some money first.
If you don't have any money, you gotta're going to get into dangerous siturations.
You might get fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress.
You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what ifcould happen...
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Covid is coming back again, wars everywhere around the world.
The stocks are drop, market is dropping, the Dollar is losing its value, everything is costs more.
(which words or phrases are better than "losing its value")
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What if you lose your job?
You can say 'the dollar is depreciating', or 'the dollar is weakening'. Any of these are fine when speaking casually, 'depreciating' is more formal but is it still fine to use casually.
HowWhat about the food, your rent, your family?
2008, the Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs were lost.
2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs awere lost in US, in the world islost 255 million jobs
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The Oil Price Crash, 1 million jobs were lost.
StillEven now, the dollar dropped ~11% in the last 6 months.
Housing increased 9% in major cityies, up nearly 50% over last year.
NIn the near future, Ai will replaced up to 375 million workers (around 14% of the global workforce).
More than 75% of American won't be able to afford a $300K home.
Over 40 million Americans continue to reply on food stamp or banks.
Because if you don't have the money, if the world will in difficultbecomes uncertain again (could you please help me finding words replace to "difficult")
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All the things that I said will happen to you.
I wrote 'uncertain again' to match your original phrasing, but really it hasn't stopped being uncertain since COVID I think!
If you get stress,ed, or get into debt.
Trust me, your life iswill be even worse.
Should be one sentence:
If you get stressed, or get into debt: trust me, your life will be even worse.
By tThe U.S. Federal Reserve, recommends saving at least 3-6 months worth of living expenses.
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I couldn't write this much in my second language, amazing job! I think a lot of the mistakes were just typing errors. I fixed some tenses just to make it consistent across the text.
July 6, 2025
Thank you my good man, the paragraph seems to looks a lot more natural when I read it again.
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There's a ton of things we need to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But right now, focus on saving money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But right now, focus on saving money. |
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Because if you don't have the money, if the world will in difficult again (could you please help me finding words replace to "difficult") All the things that I said will happen to you. Because if you don't have the money, if the world I wrote 'uncertain again' to match your original phrasing, but really it hasn't stopped being uncertain since COVID I think!
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Trust me, your life is even worse. Trust me, your life Should be one sentence: If you get stressed, or get into debt: trust me, your life will be even worse.
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Still now, dollar drop ~11% in the last 6 months.
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Near future, Ai will replaced up to 375 million workers (around 14% of global).
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More than 75% of American won't afford a $300K home. More than 75% of American won't be able to afford a $300K home. More than 75% of American More than 75% of American won't be able to afford a $300K home. |
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You might fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress. You might get fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress. You might get fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress. you could also use "be" instead of "get" "get" just means "become" in this context You might be fed up with your job, which would cause you more stress. |
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You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what if... Covid is coming back again, wars everywhere around the world. You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what You might live paycheck to paycheck, and you don't beware of sentence fragments--maybe this could help: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LIH2laQJkHM You live paycheck to paycheck, you don't really know what i |
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The stocks are drop, Dollar is losing its value, everything is cost more. The stock
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(which words or phrases are better than "losing its value") What if you lose your job? (which words or phrases are better than "losing its value") You can say 'the dollar is depreciating', or 'the dollar is weakening'. Any of these are fine when speaking casually, 'depreciating' is more formal but is it still fine to use casually. (which words or phrases are better than "losing its value") "losing its value" sounds perfectly natural to me (which words or phrases are better than "losing its value") "losing its value" is actually probably the best phrase for a currency. |
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How about the food, your rent, your family?
How the extra verbs help clarity, although I can easily imagine people asking what you said in your initial sentence How about |
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2008, Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs lost. 2008, the Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs were lost. In the 2008 2008, Global Financial Crisis, over 34 million jobs lost. This is not a full grammatically correct sentence, but it is something people might say (especially if trying to emphasise a point in a speech) so I won't change it. |
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2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs are lost in US, in the world is 255 million jobs Oil Price Crash, 1 million jobs lost. 2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs In 2020, due to Covid-19, 22 million jobs 2020, Covid-19, 22 million jobs are lost in US, Same comment |
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2022, Russian-Ukraine War, 7 milliion jobs. In 2022, due to the Russian-Ukraine War, 7 milli |
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Global Tech Layoffs, 500,000 jobs by covid, AI (only tech) Trump vs. immigran, leading to many strikes in the U.S.
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I did not including Gaza- Israel, China - Taiwan - Australia. I did not including I did not including Gaza- Not sure what Australia is doing here, if it's meant to be its own point or if you view it as connected to the China-Taiwan tensions |
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