Oct. 26, 2025
How to Balance Entertament and Study?
I want to keep a high GPA but I also want to play fan with friends every Weekends but with my desirations increasing some questions coming later.
I finded that if I out going on a whole day I will only have unenough remaning time to achieve my routine (write article in there and watch a PED video and listen The Daily carefully )
How to change that?
I want to reach my goals while I have an entertaining college life.
Can you answer my questions and continue to corrcting my grammar mistakes in the future?
Thank you!
我想在保持高绩点的同事每周末和朋友出去玩，但问题随着我的需求出现了
我发现出去玩一整天会导致我只剩下一点点时间在这一天用来达成我的每日任务（写一篇内容发到这个网站上，看一篇ped演讲帖，逐句细听The Daily
怎么去平衡这两者呢》
我想要在能达成我高绩点目标的同时拥有一个愉快的大学生活
你能解答我的问题并指出我在这篇内容中的语法错误嘛？
谢谢你！
I want to keep a high GPA, but I also want to play fan with friends every Wweekends but w. With my desirationes increasing, I have some questions coming later.
Commas help with the transition of ideas mid sentence.
I findeound that if I out going ongo out for a whole day, I will only have unenough time remaining time to achieveo finish my routine.
"to go out" = spend time with friends. "achieve" is for big events and accomplishments. "Complete", "finish", or maybe "do" would work better here.
How todo you change that?
Make sure to specify who or what the subject of the sentence is. By saying "do you" or "can I", you invite the person you are writing to to respond with their perspective and opinion. "How do you do that?" being focused on someone else, "How can I do that" being focused on yourself.
Oct. 27, 2025
Thank you for directions!But I don't understand what means " the transition of ideas mid sentence." What is the meaning of ideas mis sentence?
I want to keep a high GPA but I also want to play fan with friends every Wweekends but with my desirationse to play increasing some questions comingarise later.
not sure what fan is, maybe you meant fun. weekend is not plural (every weekend instead of every weekends), desiderations isn't a word, desires! coming later becomes come later but I find arises (come up) is a better word to use here.
I findeound that if I out going on a whole day I will only have unenough remaining time to achieve my routine
found instead of finded is the correct past here.
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How todo I change that?
I want to reach my goals while Ist haveing an entertaining college life.
Can you answer my questions and continue to correcting my grammar mistakes in the future?
to correct/correcting can both be used here, to correcting is an error as it is a mixture of both.
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Overally very good! I assume due to the nature of the mistakes you are coming from a romance language. My advice (as i'm half Italian) would be to avoid direct translations from your own language to English and rather learn naturally through listening, watching youtube videos or series on Netflix in English. It's a more relaxing and easier method as well and it allows you to understand how sentence structure works. Most of the spelling was correct it was just wrong words used or an incorrect sentence structure, this is why my suggestion is immersion rather than study. However very good explanation and good luck with your college studies!
Oct. 27, 2025
Thank you luacacorti!You lead me to the right grammar and express place out of your kindness!By the way,I want to go to Italian to study aboard,because I am so facinated with the charming of your nation's culture——I am literaly immersed in 《L'amica geniale》and your classic music pieces. What's more the meaning what I want to express in second sentence is that I cannot make it through my routime because I am going to run out of my time before finishing it.
Oct. 27, 2025
Moreover do you konw how to think in English?
How to Balance Entertainment and Study?
Small spelling error
I want to keep a high GPA, but I also want to play fangames with friends every Wweekends but with my desirations increasing. However, my desires cause me to ask some questions coming later.
I'm not sure what you meant to say by "play fan with friends"...maybe you meant "games", like video games or board games? "Desirations" is not an English word. I think you mean "desires". I changed the end of this sentence to reflect that your desires bring up some questions for you.
I findedound out that if I out going onplay games for a whole day, I will onbarely have unenough time remaining time to achieve my routine
The past tense of "find" is "found" - confusing, I know! We say "found out" directly, instead of separating these words in a sentence. I'm not sure what you meant by "going on", so I stuck with the idea that you're playing games. "Unenough" is not a word in English - it's just "enough". You had a small spelling error with "remaining".
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I'm not sure why you chose to put this in parentheses. We would rarely use parentheses in a short essay like this. Since you're talking about a series of things, I separated them by commas instead of repeating "and" each time.
How tocan I change thatis?
I want to reach my goals while Istill haveing an entertaining college life.
Small change in the verb tense here.
Can you answer my questions and continue to correcting my grammar mistakes in the future?
Thank you!
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This was a good start! I had a general idea of your premise. Some of the wording and spelling was off, so I touched that up. You ask a great question: it's very hard to balance entertainment and education, especially when you're young! When I was in college, we used to say that you had three categories: sleep, schoolwork, and social life - but that you could only pick two!
Oct. 27, 2025
Your recommands are extremely valuable!Where can I use parenthese?And why you use having in the penultimate sentence?It has want to in the front of the word and I remember that I need to use infinitive form of verb after want to.Thank you very much !Hoping you will have a perfect day!
Oct. 27, 2025
I typically wouldn't use parentheses in a more formal written piece, but you can use them if you are referring to something that is slightly off topic or trying to give an example. You could say: "I like different fruits (like bananas, apples, and pears)." But you could also do that without using the parentheses at all. As for the penultimate sentence, I changed it to "still having" in which case you would use "-ing" because it's currently happening. I hope that makes sense!
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I want to keep a high GPA but I also want to play fan with friends every Weekends but with my desirations increasing some questions coming later. I want to keep a high GPA, but I also want to play I'm not sure what you meant to say by "play fan with friends"...maybe you meant "games", like video games or board games? "Desirations" is not an English word. I think you mean "desires". I changed the end of this sentence to reflect that your desires bring up some questions for you. I want to keep a high GPA but I also want to play fan with friends every not sure what fan is, maybe you meant fun. weekend is not plural (every weekend instead of every weekends), desiderations isn't a word, desires! coming later becomes come later but I find arises (come up) is a better word to use here. I want to keep a high GPA, but I also want to play Commas help with the transition of ideas mid sentence. |
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I finded that if I out going on a whole day I will only have unenough remaning time to achieve my routine I f The past tense of "find" is "found" - confusing, I know! We say "found out" directly, instead of separating these words in a sentence. I'm not sure what you meant by "going on", so I stuck with the idea that you're playing games. "Unenough" is not a word in English - it's just "enough". You had a small spelling error with "remaining". I f found instead of finded is the correct past here. I f "to go out" = spend time with friends. "achieve" is for big events and accomplishments. "Complete", "finish", or maybe "do" would work better here. |
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I'm not sure why you chose to put this in parentheses. We would rarely use parentheses in a short essay like this. Since you're talking about a series of things, I separated them by commas instead of repeating "and" each time. (write article in there and watch a PED video and listen to The Daily carefully ) listen to |
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How to change that? How How How Make sure to specify who or what the subject of the sentence is. By saying "do you" or "can I", you invite the person you are writing to to respond with their perspective and opinion. "How do you do that?" being focused on someone else, "How can I do that" being focused on yourself. |
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I want to reach my goals while I have an entertaining college life. I want to reach my goals while Small change in the verb tense here. I want to reach my goals whil |
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Can you answer my questions and continue to corrcting my grammar mistakes in the future? Can you answer my questions and continue to correct Can you answer my questions and continue to correct to correct/correcting can both be used here, to correcting is an error as it is a mixture of both. |
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