How technology affects communication, work, orand health

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In today's time, technology has goncome so far and mostany of our everyday activities are governed by Aritificial Intelligence and advanced technologies.

Using Internet of Things (IOT), it is even possible to control the temperature inside your house even if you are not at home or keep bread ready using an automatic rotimaker.

In US English, if it was bread, we would say "bread maker" or "bread machine"

ItTechnology has made our lifeves super simple and provides usa lot of comfort.

"lives super simple" would sound more natural (to me) as "lives easier" or "has made living easier"

Using the latest technologies, scientists have developed devices and equipments which helps to save space.

For example, researchers have developed a gym equipment whichthat is athe size of thea weighing scale and it gives you the option to set the weight which you would like to lift.

Because of the digitization, it is possible to manufacture such ergonomic devices.

As every coin has two sides, there are also some disadvanatages too.

Because of easy accessibility to a lot of information, we havare losting our creativity skills, and the ability to think out of the box.

This changes the meaning slightly. But "have lost" implies it cannot be returned. However "are losing" there are still those of us who are creative and can think outside the box.

We are becoming lazy and not using our brain ops to their fullest potentimally.

This sounds more natural.

It is also compelling us to lead a sedentary lifestyle.

It is also creating lot of communication gaps amongst people, as w. We do not think it is necessary to ask questions or discuss ideas with our friends and colleagues anymore.

Hence, it is important to strike a balance between our usage of technology and advancements.

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This last sentence sounds unnatural to me. We should balance our use of technology against technology advancements? This may change what you want to convey but how about, "Hence, it is important to strike a balance between our usage of technology and human connection."

How technology affects communication, work, or health

**** I want to develop complex sentences and top level english writing.

Using Internet of Things(IOT), its even possible to control the temperature inside your house, even if you are not at home, or to keep bread ready using the automatic rotimaker.

It has made our life super simple and provides us lots of comfort.

For example, researchers have developed a gym equipment which is athe size of the weighing scale, and it gives you the option to set the weight which you would like to lift.

Because of the digitization, it's possible to manufacture such ergonomic devices.

Because of easy accessibility to lot of information, we have lost our creativity skills,and our ability to think out of the box.

It is also compelling us to lead a sedentary lifestyle.

It is also creating a lot of communication gap amongst people, as we do not think it is necessary to ask or discuss with our friends and colleagues anymore.

Hence, it's important to strike a balance between our usage of technology and advancements.