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dagny

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How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories. In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university. However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism. I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam. Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature. Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum. Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value. Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it. My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels. They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility. While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature. Reading novels is not escapist entertainment. Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

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Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning world-building within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills,. I was also able to absorbed different insights and perspectives, ands well as enriched my thought and expression.

You write very well, but I found this sentence to long/complex, so I decided to break it up into shorter ones.

Did you mean "word-building"?

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Well done.

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dagny

March 15, 2024

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Thank you for the correction!

Regarding the term "world-building," what I intend to convey is the process of constructing a fictional world for a novel or story. I want to express that through practicing writing stories or fictional narratives, I learned how to design and implement an imaginary world, particularly for use as a setting in the story. I am not sure if the phrase "worldbuilding within storytelling" conveys my intended meaning. Perhaps it doesn't really make sense?

How Taiwanese Culture ViewsCOMMENT: If you believe there is *only one* "Taiwanese Culture" the original is possible. However, I think this wording is better: How Many Taiwanese View Novels

SUGGESTION: Add the word "Many" because some Taiwanese do not read any novels.

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly drawn from Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels. outside the "classics" outside used in exams.

They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

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Perhaps the Taiwanese educational system is conservative: it is designed to produce engineers and hard sciences. Perhaps conservative politicians do not like people studying "soft" subjects such as literature.

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dagny

March 15, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections and feedback!

How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I only studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable forsurprising to people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a routesupplement to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion towards my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

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This is very high-level writing! When writing about a specific topic I recommend varying your word choice. "Intellectual" is used in almost every sentence. Other than that, great work!

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dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections, davidemiller365!

How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels (as) a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable and (more) worthy of my attention than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

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Well done.

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dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

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How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associatdefine academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or havingthat have nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion towards my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile towardnonchalant about my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were (are) other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were (are) worthy of my attention.

"hostile" is probably too strong here. You can use "are" in the later parts if you still think that way.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, andwhich enriched my thought and expressionprocess and ability to express myself.

I'm not sure what "worldbuilding" is here. This sentence is long and a bit hard to read. You can break it up if you like.

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dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you very much for the corrections, noob83!

How novels are viewed in Taiwanese Cculture Views Novels.

This conveys the same meaning, and it is grammatically correct.

When I was in middle school and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks, because they were dull and saturated with the pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I only studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

The verb should be after the subject, as it is in active voice, that is, you are saying it.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose to read my own reading materials, which wereas mostly Western literature.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly andwith exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or the national curriculum.

You don't need to add "narrowly and".

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always tolscolded me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

dagny's avatar
dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or thavingt has nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels asto be a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable and worthy of my attention than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

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This is incredibly good writing. It definitely feels like it's written at a college educated native speaker level. Fantastic job!

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dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections and encouragement!

How Taiwanese Culture Views Novels

When I was in middle and high school, I was drawn to literature and dedicated all of my free time to reading novels and writing stories.

In the Taiwanese education system, Chinese is the only subject that incorporates literature before university.

However, I detested all the articles and stories in my Chinese textbooks because they were dull and saturated with pedantic traditional Chinese philosophical beliefs, particularly those associated with Confucianism.

I studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.

Although I was an avid reader and had a voracious appetite for learning, I was frequently mocked as a "slacker" by my classmates.

This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.

Any reading material outside of the prescribed textbooks or having nothing to do with the university entrance exam is deemed to have no educational value.

Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.

My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels.

They attributed my indifference and aversion toward my schoolwork to intellectual laziness and irresponsibility.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

Reading novels is not escapist entertainment.

Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.

Feedback

If you can read, write, speak, and listen at this level, I think you can call yourself well and truly fluent in English. There is no way I could tell this wasn't written by a native English speaker.

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dgunay

March 4, 2024

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Besides the subject matter, of course :)

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dagny

March 5, 2024

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Thank you for your feedback, dgunay! I truly appreciate it!

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How Taiwanese Culture ViewsCOMMENT: If you believe there is *only one* "Taiwanese Culture" the original is possible. However, I think this wording is better: How Many Taiwanese View Novels

SUGGESTION: Add the word "Many" because some Taiwanese do not read any novels.

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My teachers and parents always told me off or insulted me whenever they caught me reading novels. outside the "classics" outside used in exams.

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While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.


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While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable and worthy of my attention than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

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While I was indeed hostile towardnonchalant about my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were (are) other intellectual pursuits more valuable than the traditional subjects taught in school that were (are) worthy of my attention.

"hostile" is probably too strong here. You can use "are" in the later parts if you still think that way.

While I was indeed hostile toward my studies, it was not because I was lazy or anti-intellectual, but rather because I believed there were other intellectual pursuits more valuable and (more) worthy of my attention than the traditional subjects taught in school that were worthy of my attention.

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This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly and exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or national curriculum.


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This may be inconceivable for people from Western countries, but Taiwanese people tend to associate academic life narrowly andwith exclusively with subjects selected by the official syllabus or the national curriculum.

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I only studied them only to prepare for my university entrance exam.

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Since textbooks could not satisfy my intellectual thirst, I chose my own reading materials, which were mostly Western literature.


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Many Taiwanese educators and parents consider reading novels as a non-academic activity and a hindrance to academic development rather than a route to it.


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I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.


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I think the Taiwanese education system seriously underrates the intellectual and scholarly importance of literature.

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Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, and enriched my thought and expression.


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Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning worldbuilding within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills, absorbed different insights and perspectives, andwhich enriched my thought and expressionprocess and ability to express myself.

I'm not sure what "worldbuilding" is here. This sentence is long and a bit hard to read. You can break it up if you like.

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Through analyzing various literary pieces, creating fictional stories, and learning world-building within storytelling, I improved my literacy skills,. I was also able to absorbed different insights and perspectives, ands well as enriched my thought and expression.

You write very well, but I found this sentence to long/complex, so I decided to break it up into shorter ones. Did you mean "word-building"?

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