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TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

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How often do you listen to the radio?

I don’t listen to the radio at all. In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it. However, I think I should buy it as an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

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In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it.

However, I think I should buy it as anfor my emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

121

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There are still some unnatural expressions and poor word usage, but I still feel like the overall flow is well written.

How often do you listen to the radio?

I don’t listen to the radio at all.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any meansin the first place, so I have no way to listen to it.

"radio" is used to both describe the medium of radio waves, and to describe machines that are used to listen to radio waves.
I think it's a bit more natural to move "in the first place" later into the sentence.

However, I think I should buy it asone as part of an emergency preparedness kit, because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

"kit" usually implies multiple things. A single thing from a kit is a "piece of kit".

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I don't often listen to the radio becuase I like to choose my own music. My parents often listen to the radio, though.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

121

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There are still some unnatural expressions and poor word usage, but I still feel like the overall flow is well written.

How often do you listen to the radio?

I don’t listen to the radio at all.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not, so I don't have any means to listen to it.

However, I think I should buy it asone for an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

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This looks good! There were just a couple small mistakes.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

121

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There are still some unnatural expressions and poor word usage, but I still feel like the overall flow is well written.

How often do you listen to the radio?

I don’t listen to the radio at all.

In the first placeFirst of all, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it.

However, I think I should buy it as an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

121

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There are still some unnatural expressions and poor word usage, but I still feel like the overall flow is well written.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not, so I lack any means to listen to itone.

However, I think I should buy it asone to include in an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

TOMO_o's avatar
TOMO_o

Jan. 5, 2026

121

Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
There are still some unnatural expressions and poor word usage, but I still feel like the overall flow is well written.

How often do you listen to the radio?


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I don’t listen to the radio at all.


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In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it.


In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not, so I lack any means to listen to itone.

In the first placeFirst of all, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any means to listen to it.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not, so I don't have any means to listen to it.

In the first place, I don’t have a radio machine, so there are not any meansin the first place, so I have no way to listen to it.

"radio" is used to both describe the medium of radio waves, and to describe machines that are used to listen to radio waves. I think it's a bit more natural to move "in the first place" later into the sentence.

However, I think I should buy it as an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.


However, I think I should buy it asone to include in an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

However, I think I should buy it as an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

However, I think I should buy it as anfor my emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

However, I think I should buy it asone for an emergency preparedness kit because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

However, I think I should buy it asone as part of an emergency preparedness kit, because there are many natural disasters in Japan.

"kit" usually implies multiple things. A single thing from a kit is a "piece of kit".

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