yesterday
How much time do you spend online every day?
I think I use the computer less than other people even on weekends. My hobbies are oil painting and an espresso, so I don’t basically touch my computer while I’m in my hobbies. However, I often watch the news on YouTube during my commute for my English study.
I think I use the computer less than other people even on the weekends.
My hobbies are oil painting and andrinking/making espresso, so I don’t basically don’t touch my computer while I’m in my hobbies.
However, I often watch the news on YouTube during my commute for my English studyies.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
This time I made a mistake with the verb form.
Also, the order of adverbs is difficult.
I'll be more careful next time.
I think I use the computer less than other people, even on weekends.
My hobbies are oil painting and andrinking espresso, so I don’t basicalrarely touch my computer while I’m in doing them (my hobbies).
You need to match the gerund ( -ing) form for all verbs in the clause. So, oil painting and drinking espresso. Same for doing hobbies. Also, a single term like "rarely" would be used over "don't basically" since you meant to illustrate that the occurrence is infrequent, but it still happens. Also, since this is a compound sentence, you don't need to say the subject (my hobbies) twice.
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Great overall, verb tenses are important though bc they come up a lot in typical conversation!
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
This time I made a mistake with the verb form.
Also, the order of adverbs is difficult.
I'll be more careful next time.
How much time do you spend online every day?
I think I use the computer less than other people even on weekends.
My hobbies are oil painting and andrinking/making espresso, so I don’t basically don't touch my computer while I’m doing my hobbies.
Choose either "drinking" or "making".
However, I often watch the news on YouTube during my commute for my English study.
yesterday
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
This time I made a mistake with the verb form.
Also, the order of adverbs is difficult.
I'll be more careful next time.
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My hobbies are oil painting and an espresso, so I don’t basically touch my computer while I’m in my hobbies. My hobbies are oil painting and Choose either "drinking" or "making". My hobbies are oil painting and You need to match the gerund ( -ing) form for all verbs in the clause. So, oil painting and drinking espresso. Same for doing hobbies. Also, a single term like "rarely" would be used over "don't basically" since you meant to illustrate that the occurrence is infrequent, but it still happens. Also, since this is a compound sentence, you don't need to say the subject (my hobbies) twice. My hobbies are oil painting and |
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