Feb. 28, 2025
How Much Money Is in Your Wallet Right Now?
I usually use cashless services to buy something, so I have only 3,000 yen. Cashless services are very convenience and also I can earn some points from it. What kind of cashless services do you often use?
How Much Money Is in Your Wallet Right Now?
I usually use cashless services to buy somethings, so I have only 3,000 yen on hand.
Adding "on hand" makes it clearer that you have 3000 yen in cash, rather than having 3000 yen in, say, your bank account.
Cashless services are very conveniencet and also I can earn some points from itusing them.
Saying "and also" is redundant. You can remove the extra word and retain the same meaning.
What kind of cashless services do you often use?
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Great entry! I hope my corrections were helpful. Very few small shops in my city accept cashless payment, which is really frustrating! I often forget to take out cash and end up unable to pay for things.
March 1, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
Cashless services are very conveniencet and also, I can earn some points from it.
March 1, 2025
Thank you for the correction.
Cashless services are very conveniencet, and also, I can earn some points from it.
Let's cut your sentence into two pieces:
(1) Cashless services are very convenience,
(2) Also I can earn some points from it.
I'll just be ignoring the 'and' for now, and that will make sense in a bit.
In the first sentence (1), 'cashless services' is the noun of the sentence, or the main subject. You'll want whatever that comes after 'are' (due to this being a verb) to be an adjective so that it can describe the noun. However, 'convenience' is also a noun, and you can't describe a noun with another noun unless it's a figure of speech.
Now, looking to the second part of the sentence (2), you may want to keep some pausing so that the writing is generally more easier to read. You don't need to break it into two different sentences using a full-stop or a semi-colon (;), but having some pausing helps, best done through a comma.
Going to the transition word 'and' that connects these two sentences together, now this itself may be nit-picky since not everyone will do this, but if you keep a word that falls in the FANBOY abbreviation ('for', 'and', 'nor', 'but', 'or', or 'yet') as the connecting word between two sentences, it's better to keep a comma for fluidity again and for the sake of grammar. Although, not many native speakers also do this as well.
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This is good writing overall! A few words can be used differently, and errors are made rarely, but I think it's good! Keep going!
March 1, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
How Much Money Iis in Your Wallet Right Now?
There's a bunch of standards for title case, some of which just capitalise every letter, which is actually an ok choice, and some which don't capitalise words considered unimportant. The later is a bit subjective, but I'd either capitialise both "is" and "in" or capitalise neither
Cashless services are very conveniencet and also I can earn some points from it.
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I've probably used cash less than 10 times in the last 6 years, so I normally don't carry any cash with me, I just withdraw some if I need it.
March 1, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
Cashless services are very conveniencet, and also I can earn some points from it.
March 1, 2025
Thank you for the correction.
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How Much Money Is in Your Wallet Right Now? How Much Money There's a bunch of standards for title case, some of which just capitalise every letter, which is actually an ok choice, and some which don't capitalise words considered unimportant. The later is a bit subjective, but I'd either capitialise both "is" and "in" or capitalise neither This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually use cashless services to buy something, so I have only 3,000 yen. I usually use cashless services to buy Adding "on hand" makes it clearer that you have 3000 yen in cash, rather than having 3000 yen in, say, your bank account. |
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Cashless services are very convenience and also I can earn some points from it. Cashless services are very convenien Cashless services are very convenien Cashless services are very convenien Let's cut your sentence into two pieces: (1) Cashless services are very convenience, (2) Also I can earn some points from it. I'll just be ignoring the 'and' for now, and that will make sense in a bit. In the first sentence (1), 'cashless services' is the noun of the sentence, or the main subject. You'll want whatever that comes after 'are' (due to this being a verb) to be an adjective so that it can describe the noun. However, 'convenience' is also a noun, and you can't describe a noun with another noun unless it's a figure of speech. Now, looking to the second part of the sentence (2), you may want to keep some pausing so that the writing is generally more easier to read. You don't need to break it into two different sentences using a full-stop or a semi-colon (;), but having some pausing helps, best done through a comma. Going to the transition word 'and' that connects these two sentences together, now this itself may be nit-picky since not everyone will do this, but if you keep a word that falls in the FANBOY abbreviation ('for', 'and', 'nor', 'but', 'or', or 'yet') as the connecting word between two sentences, it's better to keep a comma for fluidity again and for the sake of grammar. Although, not many native speakers also do this as well. Cashless services are very convenien Cashless services are very convenien Saying "and also" is redundant. You can remove the extra word and retain the same meaning. |
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