Dec. 30, 2020
Human being has at least nine senses. The first man who lists the five senses that everybody knows (sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch) was Aristotle who, even if he was very smart, sometimes made mistakes, like any other human being. He taught that we think by our heart, or that the bee born from the dead torus, for example.
There is a general agreement by which there are four senses more: thermoseption (the sense of the heat on our skin); the sense of the equilibrium, which is determined by the liquid that is in the inner ear; nociception (the perception of pain through the skin, the articulations, and internal organs. The brain is not included because it doesn't have any receptor of pain); proprioception or "body awareness". This is the unconscious knowledge of the places where are the parts of our body without touching or seeing them. If we close our eyes and move the foot, we are able to understand where it is and what movement we're doing.
Human beings hasve at least nine senses.
The first man who listsed the five senses that everybody knows (sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch) was Aristotle who, even if he was very smart, sometimes made mistakes, just like any other human being.
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I'm not sure what a torus is.
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Human beings hasve at least nine senses.
TAristotle was the first human who liststo point out the five senses that everybody knows (many of us know today, namely sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch) was Aristotle who, even if he was very smart, sometimes made. Notwithstanding his intellect, Aristotle was still prone to making mistakes, like any other human being.
I find the second sentence about Aristotle being smart and making mistakes to be irrelevant and unnecessary. It does not proceed logically from the preceding statement and there is no need to include it.
HAristotle tahought that we think bythrough our heart, or that the bee. He had other ideas, namely the notion that a bee gets born from the dead torus, for example.
The second statement about the bee is hard to understand. What do you mean by torus?
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I would remove the part about the brain not being included. I feel it is unnecessary and removes from the general sense/parallelism of the sentence.
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How Many Senses Do We Have?
HA human being has at least nine senses.
Or "Human beings have at least nine senses".
"Human being" is a singular count noun, so it needs to be preceded by an article ("a" or "the").
The first man who listsed the five senses that everybody knows (sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch) was Aristotle who, even if he was very smart, sometimes made mistakes, like any other human being.
He taught that we think byvia our heart, or that the bee born from the dead torus, for example.
I don't understand what you mean by "the bee born from the dead torus". A torus is a doughnut-like shape, and I don't see the connection to bees.
There is a general agreement by whichthat there are four senses more: thermosception (the sense of the heat on our skin); the sense of the equilibrium, which is determined by the liquid that is in the inner ear; nociception (the perception of pain through the skin, the articulationjoints, and internal organs. The brain is not included, excluding the brain because it doesn't have any pain receptor of pain);s); and proprioception or "body awareness".
It's better to avoid inserting a full sentence within a parenthetical expression in a sentence like this. In fact, even though I changed it to a clause rather than a sentence, I think it's still too long and disrupts the sentence. I'd rewrite things, breaking up the long sentence. Here's a possibility:
There is a general agreement by which there are four more senses: thermoception (the sense of heat on our skin); the sense of equilibrium, which is determined by the liquid that is in the inner ear; nociception, and proprioception or "body awareness". Nociception is the perception of pain through the skin, joints, and internal organs, excluding the brain because it doesn't have any pain receptors. Propriception is the unconscious knowledge...
This is the unconscious knowledge of the places where are the parts of our bodymeans by which we know unconsciously where the parts of the body are located, without touching or seeing them.
Note that in a clause starting with a "wh-" word (or "how"), the verb needs to move (which you did correctly, twice, in the next sentence).
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Human being has at least nine senses.
Or "Human beings have at least nine senses". "Human being" is a singular count noun, so it needs to be preceded by an article ("a" or "the"). Human beings ha Human |
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The first man who lists the five senses that everybody knows (sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch) was Aristotle who, even if he was very smart, sometimes made mistakes, like any other human being. The first man who list
I find the second sentence about Aristotle being smart and making mistakes to be irrelevant and unnecessary. It does not proceed logically from the preceding statement and there is no need to include it. The first man who list |
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He taught that we think by our heart, or that the bee born from the dead torus, for example. He taught that we think I don't understand what you mean by "the bee born from the dead torus". A torus is a doughnut-like shape, and I don't see the connection to bees.
The second statement about the bee is hard to understand. What do you mean by torus?
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There is a general agreement by which there are four senses more: thermoseption (the sense of the heat on our skin); the sense of the equilibrium, which is determined by the liquid that is in the inner ear; nociception (the perception of pain through the skin, the articulations, and internal organs. The brain is not included because it doesn't have any receptor of pain); proprioception or "body awareness". There is a general agreement It's better to avoid inserting a full sentence within a parenthetical expression in a sentence like this. In fact, even though I changed it to a clause rather than a sentence, I think it's still too long and disrupts the sentence. I'd rewrite things, breaking up the long sentence. Here's a possibility: There is a general agreement by which there are four more senses: thermoception (the sense of heat on our skin); the sense of equilibrium, which is determined by the liquid that is in the inner ear; nociception, and proprioception or "body awareness". Nociception is the perception of pain through the skin, joints, and internal organs, excluding the brain because it doesn't have any pain receptors. Propriception is the unconscious knowledge... There is a general agreement by which there I would remove the part about the brain not being included. I feel it is unnecessary and removes from the general sense/parallelism of the sentence. There is a general agreement |
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This is the unconscious knowledge of the places where are the parts of our body without touching or seeing them. This is the Note that in a clause starting with a "wh-" word (or "how"), the verb needs to move (which you did correctly, twice, in the next sentence). Th Th |
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If we close our eyes and move the foot, we are able to understand where it is and what movement we're doing.
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