March 2, 2021
How time flies. I have arrived at school two days already. I solely can’t believe that my winter holiday is over now.
At the beginning of my winter holiday, I relaxed myself for a few days and had to find a part-time job: my mom forced me. To be honest, I had never did a job before, so I was nervous and curious. I took part in the interviews for the Walmart and hotpot store. I was chosen quickly from the Walmart and waited for it’s arrangement. During the waiting time, I was recommended to be a car-washing learner in the car wash. It was an incredible experience that I have to work 12 hours a day. What’s more, we nearly had not any time to rest and had a meal in turn. My nose became sensitive, sniffing a lot, due to the dust when I cleaned the cars. My feet was soaked in water often, they became smelly and really pain. So I only worked five days and applied for quitting to my boss. To my surprise, all the wages I had just 350 yuan, it’s very little. I felt I was cheat like a pupil.
Thank goodness, I was arranged to work from the Walmart. I spent all my holiday on working there. I was luckily worked in the clothing area, I was the only student worker here. It was such a leisure and easy time. My work time didn’t over seven hours, but I can get 90 yuan more each day, haha. Actually, it was also a boring job. I was standing or wandering there all the day and serviced guests sometimes, pointing out the way they asked, recommending different clothes. Sometimes I have no one to talk with me.
Looking back so far, all the experiences enrich my daily life. I not only got money which earned by myself but also enabled my horizon about social life, realizing earn money is no easy.
Thanks for your reading. Could you please correct my mistakes! :D
How is my winter holiday was like
I have arrivedbeen at school for two days already.
I soleimply can’t believe that my winter holiday is over now.
At the beginning of my winter holiday, I relaxed myself for a few days and, but had to find a part-time job: after my mom forced me to.
To be honest, I had never dihad a job before, so I was nervous and curious.
I took part in the interviews for the Walmart and a hotpot store.
I was chosen quickly from theby Walmart and waited for it’s arrangement.
During the waiting time, I was recommended to be a car-washing learner in the car wash.
It was an incredible experience that I haved to work 12 hours a day.
What’s more, we had nearly had not anynot time to rest, and had ato eat meals in turns.
My nose became sensitive, sniffing a lot, due to the dust when I cleaned the cars.
My feet was soaked in water often, they became smelly and really painful.
So I only worked five days and applied forto quitting to my boss.
To my surprise, all the wages I had earnt was just 350 yuan, it’s very little.
I felt I was cheat like a pupiled.
Thank goodness, I was arranged to work from theat Walmart.
I spent all my holiday on working there.
I was luckily workassigned into the clothing area, I was the only student worker there.
It was such a leisurely and easy time.
My work time didn’t go over seven hours, but I can get 90 yuan more each day, haha.
Actually, it was also a boring job.
I was standing or wandering there all the day and serviced guests sometimes, pointing out the way they asked, recommending different clothes.
Sometimes I haved no one to talk with me.
Looking back so far, all the experiences enriched my daily life.
I not only got money which I earned by myself but also enablbroadened my horizons about social life, realizing that earning money is not easy.
Thanks for you for reading.
Could you please correct my mistakes!
:D
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My feet was soaked in water often, they became smelly and really pain. My feet was soaked in water often, they became smelly and really painful. |
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How is my winter holiday like How |
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How time flies. |
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I have arrived at school two days already. I have |
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I solely can’t believe that my winter holiday is over now. I s |
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At the beginning of my winter holiday, I relaxed myself for a few days and had to find a part-time job: my mom forced me. At the beginning of my winter holiday, I relaxed |
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To be honest, I had never did a job before, so I was nervous and curious. To be honest, I |
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I took part in the interviews for the Walmart and hotpot store. I took part in the interviews for |
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I was chosen quickly from the Walmart and waited for it’s arrangement. I was chosen quickly |
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During the waiting time, I was recommended to be a car-washing learner in the car wash. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was an incredible experience that I have to work 12 hours a day. It was an incredible experience that I ha |
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What’s more, we nearly had not any time to rest and had a meal in turn. What’s more, we had nearly |
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My nose became sensitive, sniffing a lot, due to the dust when I cleaned the cars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I only worked five days and applied for quitting to my boss. So I only worked five days and applied |
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To my surprise, all the wages I had just 350 yuan, it’s very little. To my surprise, all the wages I had earnt was just 350 yuan, it’s very little. |
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I felt I was cheat like a pupil. I felt I was cheat |
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Thank goodness, I was arranged to work from the Walmart. Thank goodness, I was arranged to work |
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I spent all my holiday on working there. I spent all my holiday |
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I was luckily worked in the clothing area, I was the only student worker here. I was luckily |
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It was such a leisure and easy time. It was such a leisurely and easy time. |
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My work time didn’t over seven hours, but I can get 90 yuan more each day, haha. My work time didn’t go over seven hours, but I can get 90 yuan more each day, haha. |
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Actually, it was also a boring job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was standing or wandering there all the day and serviced guests sometimes, pointing out the way they asked, recommending different clothes. I was standing or wandering there all |
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Sometimes I have no one to talk with me. Sometimes I ha |
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Looking back so far, all the experiences enrich my daily life. Looking back so far, all the experiences enriched my daily life. |
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I not only got money which earned by myself but also enabled my horizon about social life, realizing earn money is no easy. I not only got money which I earned by myself but also |
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Thanks for your reading. Thank |
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Could you please correct my mistakes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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