Dec. 9, 2024
How I worried my daughter
My daughter was born 2 years ago, since then I've worried so much about her future day by day.My angel and I climbed the ladder together at the children-play center, bounced around the apartment with the beat of those pop music she likes, teaches her how to pronounce and so on.We enjoyed during the leisure time,terrified after she felt asleep.Nowadays those diseases come in slience without any signs:autism,bipolar depression,addiction to cell phones,ADHD,etc.No one knows how and when they come to kids, and how to cure those demon who would change our fate.We know the harmful effects of fructose syrup, the potential threat of vaccine(I thought the regular pain when injection ocuurs is burdened for children, the compounds is irrelevant),the algorithm-caused addiction by tech companies, the plastic toys & garget made for fun not for bite-but somehow kid can always find those material tasteful, chewing and licking when my eyes turn away.I'm a atheist who can't pray for god to look after my poor baby,but only to persuade myself to embrace our unknown future.
我女儿两年前出生，从那开始我非常担心她的未来，而这种担心源自于我与妻子与日俱增的关爱。我的小天使和我一起在儿童中心爬梯子，伴随着她喜欢的流行音乐在公寓里跳舞，教她去读西兰花、迷迭香、蕃茄酱等等。我们享受着闲暇的时光，但在她入睡后，只有深深的恐惧。如今自闭症、抑郁症、手机成瘾和ADHD等疾病来得悄无声息。没人知道这些疾病的病因，什么时候到来，以及怎么去治疗这些会影响我们命运的疾病。我们知道果葡糖浆的危害，疫苗的潜在威胁（我认为是注射疫苗时的一次次的疼痛导致孩子无法忍受，而不是里面的成份），大科技公司的成瘾算法，用来玩而不是吃的塑料玩具与制品（但孩子总是在我眼睛转开时去咀嚼、舔舐，来享受这些“美味”）。我是个无神论者，所以没法向上帝祈求祂来照顾我的可怜的娃，我也只能去劝说自己去迎接我们未知的未来。
My daughter was born 2 years ago, since then I've worried so much about her future day by day. My angel and I climbed the ladder together at the children-play center, bounced around the apartment with the beat of those pop music she likes, teachesaught her how to pronounce words and so on. We enjoyed douring the leisure time, terrified after she felt asleep. Nowadays those diseases come in slienceilently without any signs:a Autism, bipolar depression, addiction to cell phones, ADHD, etc. No one knows how and when they come towill affect kids, and how to cure those demons who would change our fate. We know the harmful effects of fructose syrup, the potential threat of vaccine (I thought the regular pain when injection ocuurs is burdensomed for children, the compounds isnside are irrelevant),the algorithm-caused addiction by tech companies, the plastic toys & gardgets made for fun not for biteing-but somehow kid can always find those material tastefuly, chewing and licking when my eyes turn away. I'm an atheist who can't pray for god to look after my poor baby, but only to persuade myself to embrace our unknown future.
Make sure you include a space when you start a new sentence was the main thing. Good job!
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My daughter was born 2 years ago, since then I've been so worried about her future under the care of my wife and me. ( i don't understand what the rest of the sentence meant in this context). My ( daughter) ( angle??) . My daughter and I would climb( u are talking in past ) the ladder together at the playground ( playground is simpler instead of play center), bounce around the apartment to the beat of her favorite pop music, and i would teach her how to pronounce broccoli, rosemary , ketchup , and so on. ( simplify with, i would help her practise her English pronunciations). ( my opinion so far, good luck!!)
Dec. 10, 2024
Appreciate for your kindness and patience,that means a lot.
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My daughter born 2 years ago, since then I've worried so much about her future within the care & love with my wife made that mantality grow day by day.My angle and I climb the ladder together at the children-play center, bounce around the apartment with the beat of those pop music she likes, teach her how to pronounce brocoli,rosemary,ketchup and so on.We enjoyed during the leisure time,terrified after she felt asleep.Nowadays those diseases come in slience without any signs:autism,bipolar depression,addiction to cell phones,ADHD,etc.No one knows how and when they come to kids, and how to cure those demon who would change our fate.We know the harmful effects of fructose syrup, the potential threat of vaccine(I thought the regular pain when injection ocuurs is burdened for children, the compounds is irrelevant),the algorithm-caused addiction by tech companies, the plastic toys & garget made for fun not for bite-but somehow kid can always find those material tasteful, chewing and licking when my eyes turn away.I'm a atheist who can't pray for god to look after my poor baby,but only to persuade myself to embrace our unknown future. |
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My daughter was born 2 years ago, since then I've worried so much about her future day by day.My angel and I climbed the ladder together at the children-play center, bounced around the apartment with the beat of those pop music she likes, teaches her how to pronounce and so on.We enjoyed during the leisure time,terrified after she felt asleep.Nowadays those diseases come in slience without any signs:autism,bipolar depression,addiction to cell phones,ADHD,etc.No one knows how and when they come to kids, and how to cure those demon who would change our fate.We know the harmful effects of fructose syrup, the potential threat of vaccine(I thought the regular pain when injection ocuurs is burdened for children, the compounds is irrelevant),the algorithm-caused addiction by tech companies, the plastic toys & garget made for fun not for bite-but somehow kid can always find those material tasteful, chewing and licking when my eyes turn away.I'm a atheist who can't pray for god to look after my poor baby,but only to persuade myself to embrace our unknown future. My daughter was born 2 years ago, since then I've worried so much about her future day by day. My angel and I climbed the ladder together at the children-play center, bounced around the apartment with the beat of those pop music she likes, t Make sure you include a space when you start a new sentence was the main thing. Good job! |
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