Aug. 13, 2025
How I spent my day
At language lessons in elementary school the teacher often gave a task to write an essay about how I spent a summer or a week. These tasks seemed absolutely idiotic. However, when I started writing texts on LangCorrect, I noticed that writing essays about old memories is a much simpler task than describing current affairs. So, I'll try to do it again - this time in English :)
I went to my doctor early in the morning. I had to do it two weeks ago, but I got sick and then the doctor went on vacation. It was a routine check-up after eye surgery and I was very worried about the delay. Fortunately, everything is fine. The next surgery is scheduled for September and now I'm counting the days until my vision becomes clear again.
After that I picked up car parts from the store and tried to work. The attempt was unsuccessful. I live in the south of the country near the area of military operations. Usually this doesn't cause any problems, but authorities shut down the Internet during drone attacks. Today was a such day, so I just went to bed because I didn't get enough sleep this morning.
The best part of the day began late in the evening. My wife wanted to see a meteor shower and we went to the mountains. She really loves looking at the night sky and usually it takes at least an hour. However, the moon was too bright today and we went for a ride after we saw just a few meteors. The windows in the car were open, we drove along the night serpentines, talked about everything and enjoyed the cool August wind in our hair.
How I spent my day
AtDuring language lessons in elementary school, the teacher often gave a task to write an essay about how I spent a summer or a week.
(1) For lessons, we will use "during".
(2) I added a comma to help pace the sentence.
These tasks seemed absolutely idiotic.
However, when I started writing texts on LangCorrect, I noticed that writing essays about old memories is a much simpler task than describing current affairs.
So, I'll try to do it again - this time in English :)
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I went to see my doctor early in the morning.
Alternatively: "I went to the doctor's early in the morning."
I hawas supposed to do it two weeks ago, but I got sick and then the doctor went on vacation.
It was a routine check-up after eye surgery and I was very worried about the delay.
Fortunately, everything iwas fine.
Mind the tense.
The next surgery is scheduled for September and now I'm counting the days until my vision becomes clear again.
After that I picked up car parts from the store and tried to work.
The attempt was unsuccessful.
I live in the south of the country near the area of military operations.
Usually this doesn't cause any problems, but the authorities shut down the Internet during drone attacks.
"The authorities" might be more appropriate here, since you're specifically referring to the Russian authorities.
Today was a such a day, so I just went to bed because I didn't get enough sleep this morning.
"A such day" is not the natural expression.
The best part of the day began late in the evening.
My wife wanted to see a meteor shower and we went to the mountains.
She really loves looking at the night sky and usually it takes at least an hour.
However, the moon was too bright today and, so we went for a ride after we saw just a few meteors.
I'd suggest using "so" here to more clearly establish the cause and effect relationship between the moon being too bright and you going on a ride.
TWith the windows inof the car were open, we drove along the night serpentine night-time roads, talkeding about everything and enjoyeding the cool August wind in our hair.
(1) I tweaked the sentence a little so that it sounds more fluent.
(2) Alternatively: "With the car windows open".
(3) I don't think we use "serpetine" to mean "road". However, you can use it as an adjective.
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This was well-written; your past experience with the language shows! I am happy to hear that your eye was fine.
Aug. 13, 2025
Thank you!
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At language lessons in elementary school the teacher often gave a task to write an essay about how I spent a summer or a week.
(1) For lessons, we will use "during". (2) I added a comma to help pace the sentence. |
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These tasks seemed absolutely idiotic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, I'll try to do it again - this time in English :) I went to my doctor early in the morning. So, I'll try to do it again - this time in English :) Alternatively: "I went to the doctor's early in the morning." |
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I had to do this two weeks ago, but first I got sick and then the doctor went on vacation. |
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However, when I started writing texts on LangCorrect, I noticed that writing essays about old memories is a much simpler task than describing current affairs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a routine check-up after eye surgery and I was very worried about the delay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, everything is fine. Fortunately, everything Mind the tense. |
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The next surgery is scheduled for September and now I'm counting the days until my vision becomes clear again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that I picked up car parts from the store and tried to work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The attempt was unsuccessful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I live in the south of the country near the area of military operations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Usually this doesn't cause any problems, but authorities shut down the Internet during drone attacks. Usually this doesn't cause any problems, but the authorities shut down the Internet during drone attacks. "The authorities" might be more appropriate here, since you're specifically referring to the Russian authorities. |
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Today was a such day, so I just went to bed because I didn't get enough sleep this morning. Today was "A such day" is not the natural expression. |
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The best part of the day began late in the evening. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My lovely wife wanted to see a meteor shower in the skies and we went to the mountains. |
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She really loves looking at the night sky and usually it takes at least an hour. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, the moon was too bright today and we went for a ride after we saw just a few meteors. However, the moon was too bright today I'd suggest using "so" here to more clearly establish the cause and effect relationship between the moon being too bright and you going on a ride. |
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The windows in the car were open, we drove along the night serpentines, talked about everything and enjoyed the cool August wind in our hair.
(1) I tweaked the sentence a little so that it sounds more fluent. (2) Alternatively: "With the car windows open". (3) I don't think we use "serpetine" to mean "road". However, you can use it as an adjective. |
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However, when I started writing texts on LangCorrect, I noticed that writing essays about old memories is much simpler task than describing current affairs. |
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My lovely wife wanted to see a meteor shower and we went to the mountains. |
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I had to do it two weeks ago, but first I got sick and then the doctor went on vacation. |
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My wife wanted to see a meteor shower and we went to the mountains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to do it two weeks ago, but I got sick and then the doctor went on vacation. I |
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