Oct. 8, 2025
How i spend my free time?
i'm a third- year university student and this year is definitely the most difficult one🥲 that doesnt mean I have no free time but when i find it, i walking while listening music. To be honest i LIVE with my headphone on! Recently I've been listening linkin park but i also love jazz. And i read books- especially AGATHA CRISTIE❤️. She KNOWS how to write! In high school, i mostly read the classics like Dostoyevsky, Zweig. And you know what? Zweig is STILL my fave author. I love his writing style. I've always been curious about reading, especially about science. So sometimes i read articles outside my field. I usually spend my free time reading- it just makes me calm. I also wanna learn the play violin but i have no time right now:(
3. sınıf üniversite öğrencisiyim ve bu sene en zor senem. Zamanım hiç yok demiyorum ama zaman bulursam müzik dinleyerek yürüyüş yapıyorum. Dürüst olacağım, kulaklıklarımla yaşıyorum. Son zamanlarda linkin park dinliyorum ama jazz dinlemeyi de severim. Ve kitap okuyorum, özellikle Agatha Cristie. Yazmayı iyi biliyor. Lisede klasikleri okurdum, Dostoyevski ve Zweig gibi. Şunu söyleyeyim, Zweig benim hala en sevdiğim yazar. Yazılarını çok beğeniyorum. Okumak konusunda hep meraklı olmuşumdur özellikle bilimsel yazılar. Bazenleri alanım dışında makaleler okuyorum. Genellikle boş zamanımı okuyarak geçiriyorum. Beni rahat hissettiriyor. Bir de keman çalmayı öğrenmek istiyorum ama şu an buna zamanım yok:(
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iI'm a third- year university student, and this year is definitely the most difficult one🥲 tThat doesn't mean I have no free time, but when iI find it, iI like walking while listening to music.
"Listen" always needs "to"
To be honest i, I LIVE with my headphone on!
Just a note that writing in all-caps for emphasis is pretty normal in text or online posts, but it is not formally correct to do it, so you would not do it professionally or at school.
Recently, I've been listening lto Linkin pPark, but iI also love jazz.
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And iI read books - especially AGATHA CRISTIEgatha Christie books ❤️.
Since Agatha Christie is the author and not a book herself, added "books"
She KNOWSknows how to write!
In high school, iI mostly read the classics, like Dostoyevsky, and Zweig.
And you know what?
Zweig is STILLstill my favorite author.
Again, this would pass as online-speak but not as formally correct grammar
I love his writing style.
I've always been curious about reading, especially about science.
So sometimes iI read articles outside (of) my field.
I usually spend my free time reading- it just makes me calm.
I also wannat to learn theo play the violin, but iI have no time right now :(
"Wanna" is not considered correct grammar, either, and should be "want to" instead. To be honest, even though we sometimes say "wanna" verbally (because we are speaking lazily), it's used a lot less in casual writing
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I've always been curious about reading, especially about science. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So sometimes i read articles outside my field. So sometimes |
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I usually spend my free time reading- it just makes me calm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also wanna learn the play violin but i have no time right now:( I also wan "Wanna" is not considered correct grammar, either, and should be "want to" instead. To be honest, even though we sometimes say "wanna" verbally (because we are speaking lazily), it's used a lot less in casual writing |
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How i spend my free time? How "I" is always capitalized This isn't a question, so no question mark |
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i'm a third- year university student and this year is definitely the most difficult one🥲 that doesnt mean I have no free time but when i find it, i walking while listening music.
"Listen" always needs "to" |
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To be honest i LIVE with my headphone on! To be honest Just a note that writing in all-caps for emphasis is pretty normal in text or online posts, but it is not formally correct to do it, so you would not do it professionally or at school. |
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Recently I've been listening linkin park but i also love jazz. Recently, I've been listening Names are capitalized |
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And i read books- especially AGATHA CRISTIE❤️. And Since Agatha Christie is the author and not a book herself, added "books" |
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She KNOWS how to write! She |
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In high school, i mostly read the classics like Dostoyevsky, Zweig. In high school, |
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And you know what? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Zweig is STILL my fave author. Zweig is Again, this would pass as online-speak but not as formally correct grammar |
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