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How I found this website

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town and lot of films and TV series were made there.

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How I fFound tThis wWebsite

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I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful tofor improveing my English and once. Once fluent, I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful townplace and lot of films and TV series weare made there.

It's okay to eliminate mentioning the website again. It helps to make your writing more concise, even though the original wasn't technically incorrect. I wasn't positive what you meant by "once," so I improvised, based on context

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Seems like you're well on your way. You could probably get along fine in London, now. Great job!
FYI, I speak/write American English

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I found this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London once because I think it's a beautiful town —and lot of films and TV series were made there.

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I found this website from a Youtube vloggervlogger (on Youtube) and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. One day, I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town and lot of films and TV series were made there.

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I want to go to London one day too! It really is beautiful, and it has a lot of historical significance.

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I found out about this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful tofor improveing my English and once. I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town (OR city OR place) and lots of films and TV series were made (OR shot) there.

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How I found this website

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and o. Once I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful towncity and lot of films and TV series were made there.

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"Town" is for places with a smaller population. London is definitely a city because it is crowded and many people live there.

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How I found this website

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London, because I think it's a beautiful towncity and a lot of films and TV series were made there.

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Overall, very comprehensible, just some minor nitpicks.

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How I found this website

I found this website via a Youtube vlogger/I heard about this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful towncity and lot of films and TV series were made there.

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Not sure what you intended with 'once' so I just broke up the long sentence to make two points.

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shin1

Dec. 30, 2019

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Edit: typo. Meant to write 'it' not 'is' for 'and I think it will be helpful;. Also it's 'a lot of' not 'lot of'.

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How I fFound tThis wWebsite

Capitalize all first letters in titles (except conjunctions)

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town and lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found this website via a Youtube vlogger/I heard about this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful towncity and lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London, because I think it's a beautiful towncity and a lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and o. Once I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful towncity and lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found out about this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful tofor improveing my English and once. I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town (OR city OR place) and lots of films and TV series were made (OR shot) there.

I found this website from a Youtube vloggervlogger (on Youtube) and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. One day, I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful town and lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger, and I think this website will be helpful to improve my English and once. I want to go to London once because I think it's a beautiful town —and lot of films and TV series were made there.

I found this website from a Youtube vlogger and I think this website will be helpful tofor improveing my English and once. Once fluent, I want to go to London because I think it's a beautiful townplace and lot of films and TV series weare made there.

It's okay to eliminate mentioning the website again. It helps to make your writing more concise, even though the original wasn't technically incorrect. I wasn't positive what you meant by "once," so I improvised, based on context

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