Sept. 14, 2024
During this afternoon I was boring and I was scrolling on youtube.
Until I discovered the youtube chanel of https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and she made a video about how to learn english like an adult (or something like this).
Next in her video she mentioned this website.
So just after I will go check this website out .
I think that website is really great because I can improve my english level to later because I really would like to move in USA.By the way during this summer I went in Houston for 1 month in family and it was amazing.
For the moment I'm a teenager and I'm from France. What we learn in English subject at school is really bad.
So I hope my english is not too bad.
Have a good day
Cet après-midi, je m'ennuyais et je scrollais sur YouTube, jusqu'à ce que je découvre la chaîne YouTube de https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries .
Elle avait fait une vidéo sur comment apprendre l'anglais en tant qu'adulte (ou quelque chose comme ça).
Dans sa vidéo, elle mentionnait un site web. Juste après, je suis allé y jeter un œil. Je pense que ce site est vraiment sympa parce qu'il me permet d'améliorer mon niveau d'anglais pour l'avenir, car j'aimerais vraiment déménager aux États-Unis.
D'ailleurs, pendant ces vacances d'été, je suis allé à Houston pendant un mois, dans une famille, et c'était génial.
Pour le moment, je suis adolescent et je viens de France. Ce qu'on apprend en anglais à l'école est très insuffisant. J'espère donc que mon anglais n'est pas trop mauvais.
Passez une bonne journée !
During this afternoon I was boringed and I was scrolling on youtube.
Until I discovered the youtube chanel of https://www.youtube.com/@veronika_languagediaries and she made a video about how to learn english like an adult (or something like this).
Next, in her video she mentioned this website.
So just after I willanted to go check this website out .
I think that website is really great because I can improve my english level to later because I really would like to move into the USA.By the way during this summer I went into Houston for 1a month inwith my family and it was amazing.
For the momentCurrently, I'm a teenager and I'm from France.
What we learn in English as a subject at school is really bad.
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So I hope my english is not too bad.
Have a good day
Feedback
Welcome, I hope you'll have a great time here.
Have a nice day too.
How I discovered this website
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You don't need to 2x "I'm"
What we learn during English subjectclasses at school is not really baduseful.
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"What we learn from our English lessons at school is not really useful"
So, I hope my eEnglish is not too bad.
Have a good day
Feedback
Great work.
Some tips:
- Remember to always capitalize proper nouns (e.g. YouTube, English, French)
- Review the sentences you write. If you see duplication, it may mean there's a way to simplify things. For example, be careful with (2x "I am") or (2x "because").
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