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dubrakva

Dec. 16, 2021

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How I became a superhero

The superheroes are very interesting to me.Firsty,they have something special what we,common people don't have and secondly we can always realy on them,because they are here to help us.

I always wanted to be a superhero and until recently I've been only thinking and writing about it. One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I have.I'm wearing tight black suit with sparcles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman.I have a long brown hair tied in pony tail. I'm wearing a cool sneakers.My superpowers are really amazing. I can talk to animals and plants. I think they need a superhero as well so they can teel what they need.Next, I can flying. Im invisible too,I think that I am a really supercool hero.I fall asleap and I dreamed of me as a superhero and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...

To summerise the story ,I'm popular,people call me when they need a help and the kids loving me.Finally my dream came true,I'm superhero!

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How I became a superhero

The sSuperheroes are very interesting to me. Firsty, they have something special wthat we, common people don't have and s. Secondly, we can always realy on them, because they are here to help us.

I have always wanted to be a superhero, and until recently I've been only thinkingought and writingten about it.

One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I want to have. I'm wearing a tight black suit with sparckles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman. I have a long brown hair tied in a pony tail.

I'm wearing a cool sneakers. My superpowers are really amazing.

I can talk to animals and plants.

I think they need a superhero as well so they can teelshare what they need. Next, I can flying.

Im can turn invisible, too,. I think that I am a really super-cool hero. I faell asleaep and I dreamed of meyself as a superhero, and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...

To summearisze the story , I'm popular, people call me when they need a help, and the kids lovinge me. Finally my dream came true,! I'm a superhero!

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dubrakva

Dec. 19, 2021

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Thank you for taking your time!

How I became a superhero


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The superheroes are very interesting to me.Firsty,they have something special what we,common people don't have and secondly we can always realy on them,because they are here to help us.


The sSuperheroes are very interesting to me. Firsty, they have something special wthat we, common people don't have and s. Secondly, we can always realy on them, because they are here to help us.

I always wanted to be a superhero and until recently I've been only thinking and writing about it.


I have always wanted to be a superhero, and until recently I've been only thinkingought and writingten about it.

One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I have.I'm wearing tight black suit with sparcles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman.I have a long brown hair tied in pony tail.


One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I want to have. I'm wearing a tight black suit with sparckles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman. I have a long brown hair tied in a pony tail.

I'm wearing a cool sneakers.My superpowers are really amazing.


I'm wearing a cool sneakers. My superpowers are really amazing.

I can talk to animals and plants.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think they need a superhero as well so they can teel what they need.Next, I can flying.


I think they need a superhero as well so they can teelshare what they need. Next, I can flying.

Im invisible too,I think that I am a really supercool hero.I fall asleap and I dreamed of me as a superhero and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...


Im can turn invisible, too,. I think that I am a really super-cool hero. I faell asleaep and I dreamed of meyself as a superhero, and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...

To summerise the story ,I'm popular,people call me when they need a help and the kids loving me.Finally my dream came true,I'm superhero!


To summearisze the story , I'm popular, people call me when they need a help, and the kids lovinge me. Finally my dream came true,! I'm a superhero!

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