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The doctors took a careful medical check on Zhu; he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth had already been loosened, and his back spine injured ande injured his spine so he would not be able to walk as normal, the severity of the injury was severe/serious. The doctors took a careful medical check on Zhu; he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth had already been loosened, and he injured his spine so he would not be able to walk as normal, the injury was severe/serious.

You wouldn't say back spine you would just say spine. It is just slightly clunky in the wording and when using the word able you often need to say 'be' before it e.g. I would be able to do that, or would I be able to do that. You can say as well I was able to do that but would and able always needs a be somewhere.

The doctors tookdid a careful medical check on Zhu; he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth were already loosen, and his back, his spine was injured and he would not able to walk as normal, t. The severity of the injury was serious. The doctors did a careful medical check on Zhu; he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth were already loose, his spine was injured and he would not able to walk as normal. The severity of the injury was serious.

The doctors tookperformed a careful medical check on Zhu; he had already lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth, which were already loosen, and h. His back spine was injured, and he would not be able to walk as normal,ly; the severity of the injury was serious. The doctors performed a careful medical check on Zhu; he had already lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth, which were already loose. His back spine was injured, and he would not be able to walk normally; the severity of the injury was serious.

The doctors took a careful medical check ondid a thorough examination of Zhu;: he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth alreadywere loosen,ed and his back spine was so injured andthat he would not be able to walk as normally, the severity of the injury wasbeing that serious. The doctors did a thorough examination of Zhu: he had lost two incisors and two wisdom teeth were loosened and his spine was so injured that he would not be able to walk normally, the severity of the injury being that serious.

Due to the tragedy and biglots of pressure from the school. Due to the tragedy and lots of pressure from the school.

Due to tragedy and bighese injuries, he had huge pressure from the school. Due to these injuries, he had huge pressure from the school.

The school? Might not be the right word.

Due to tragedy and big pressure from the school., Due to tragedy and big pressure from the school,

Due to tragedy and big pressure from the school.

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The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldifirefighters who were involved: The captain and three soldifirefighters were forced to retire at once, and other soldifirefighters who beat Zhu were given a warning letter. The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the firefighters who were involved: The captain and three firefighters were forced to retire at once, and other firefighters who beat Zhu were given a warning letter.

The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved: Tthe captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and the other soldiers who had beaten Zhu were given a warning letter. The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved: the captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and the other soldiers who had beaten Zhu were given a warning.

Fire station? Might not be the right word. Do you mean: "military" or "barracks"?

The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved:. The captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and other soldiers who beat Zhu were given a warning letter. The fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved. The captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and other soldiers who beat Zhu were given a warning letter.

TDue to the tragedy and a large amount of pressure from the school, the fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved: The captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and other soldiers who beat Zhu were given a warning letter. Due to the tragedy and a large amount of pressure from the school, the fire station eventually gave a strict punishment to the soldiers who were involved: The captain and three soldiers were forced to retire at once, and other soldiers who beat Zhu were given a warning letter.

The final punishment was quite strongharsh. The final punishment was quite harsh.

The final punishment was quite strongevere. The final punishment was quite severe.

The final punishment was quite strongevere. The final punishment was quite severe.

In China, if any soldier who wereas forced to leave the military service they would be affected for histheir whole life. In China, if any soldier was forced to leave the military service they would be affected for their whole life.

In China, if any soldier who wereas forced to leave military service would be affected for his whole life. In China, any soldier who was forced to leave military service would be affected for life.

In China, if any soldier who wereis forced to leave military service, it would be affected for his their whole life. In China, if any soldier is forced to leave military service, it would affect their whole life.

In China, ifwhen any soldier who wereis forced to leave military service would be, it affecteds him for his whole life. In China, when any soldier is forced to leave military service, it affects him for his whole life.

My classmate - Zhu, however, his head can not lift up whenwill never be able to lift up his head whilst walking foreveragain. My classmate - Zhu, will never be able to lift up his head whilst walking again.

My classmate - Zhu, however, his head can not lift up when walking forevercould not walk with his head held high for the rest of his life. My classmate - Zhu, however, could not walk with his head held high for the rest of his life.

MHowever, my classmate - Zhu, however, his head can not lift uphis head when walking forever. However, my classmate Zhu cannot lift his head when walking forever.

My classmate -, Zhu, however, his head can not lift up whenhis head while walking forever again. My classmate, Zhu, however, cannot lift up his head while walking ever again.

そうですね。

In the next entry, I will discuss why the soldiers dare to beat a child in public. In the next entry, I will discuss why soldiers dare to beat a child in public.

In the next entry, I will discuss why the soldiers dared to beat a child in public. In the next entry, I will discuss why the soldiers dared to beat a child in public.