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cristinnity

Feb. 20, 2021

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How education can be improved?

I think education would improve if teachers teach about diversity, respect, emotions and encourage their students to relate with all of the other classmates. For example, making different groups of work in which students can study together, help each other and expose their opinions and feelings about different topics.

Once, I read about an interesting activity that did a teacher in her class. She asked her students to look for something special in their homes (a book, a draw, a photo…), write on a paper why that thing was important for them, and bring to the class. The next day, she asked her students to give her that things and then she divided up them among students. After that, each student started to talk about the feelings and thoughts that the thing inspired them. Finally, each student read about the thing they brought to the class. So, all of her students learnt to speak and to listen, and compared two different ways of see the same thing.

I think activities like that can help to develop the view from different perspectives, the respect of other ways of understanding and to feel empathy for others. So, go to school wouldn’t be only learn about maths or other subjects, but learn about diversity and respect it.

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How eCan Education can bBe iImproved?

In English, the first letter in all nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., is capitalized in the title.

In English, the word order changes if you're asking a question.

I think education would improve if teachers teach about diversity, respect, emotions, and encourage their students to relate with all of the otheir classmates.

For example, making different groups of work in which students can study together, help each other, and exposelain their opinions and feelings about different topics.

Once, I read about an interesting activity that did a teacher did in her class.

She asked her students to look for something special in their homes (a book, a draw, a photo…), and write on a paper why that thing was important forto them, and bring to thehad them bring it to class.

The next day, she asked her students to give her thatose things and then she divided up them up among the students.

After that, each student started to talk about how they feelings and thoughts thatlt regarding the thing that inspired them.

Finally, each student read about the thing they brought to the class.

So, all of her students learnted to speak and to listen, and compared two different ways of seeing the same thing.

I think activities like that can help to develop the view from different perspectives, thea diverse viewpoint, a respect of other ways of understanding, and to feelings empathy for others.

So, going to school wouldn’t be only be about learning about maths or other subjects, but also learning about diversity and respecting it.

"Maths" is the British term for "math" or "mathematics".

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cristinnity

Feb. 21, 2021

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Thank you very much!

How education can be improved?


How eCan Education can bBe iImproved?

In English, the first letter in all nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., is capitalized in the title. In English, the word order changes if you're asking a question.

I think education would improve if teachers teach about diversity, respect, emotions and encourage their students to relate with all of the other classmates.


I think education would improve if teachers teach about diversity, respect, emotions, and encourage their students to relate with all of the otheir classmates.

For example, making different groups of work in which students can study together, help each other and expose their opinions and feelings about different topics.


For example, making different groups of work in which students can study together, help each other, and exposelain their opinions and feelings about different topics.

Once, I read about an interesting activity that did a teacher in her class.


Once, I read about an interesting activity that did a teacher did in her class.

She asked her students to look for something special in their homes (a book, a draw, a photo…), write on a paper why that thing was important for them, and bring to the class.


She asked her students to look for something special in their homes (a book, a draw, a photo…), and write on a paper why that thing was important forto them, and bring to thehad them bring it to class.

The next day, she asked her students to give her that things and then she divided up them among students.


The next day, she asked her students to give her thatose things and then she divided up them up among the students.

After that, each student started to talk about the feelings and thoughts that the thing inspired them.


After that, each student started to talk about how they feelings and thoughts thatlt regarding the thing that inspired them.

Finally, each student read about the thing they brought to the class.


Finally, each student read about the thing they brought to the class.

So, all of her students learnt to speak and to listen, and compared two different ways of see the same thing.


So, all of her students learnted to speak and to listen, and compared two different ways of seeing the same thing.

I think activities like that can help to develop the view from different perspectives, the respect of other ways of understanding and to feel empathy for others.


I think activities like that can help to develop the view from different perspectives, thea diverse viewpoint, a respect of other ways of understanding, and to feelings empathy for others.

So, go to school wouldn’t be only learn about maths or other subjects, but learn about diversity and respect it.


So, going to school wouldn’t be only be about learning about maths or other subjects, but also learning about diversity and respecting it.

"Maths" is the British term for "math" or "mathematics".

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