May 28, 2020
How does the mass media affect the behavior of young people?
The mass media has benefitted human beings for many years. However, I believe that its bad effects on us, especially young people are more significant than good ones. It is true that it is very useful because you can look something up whenever you come across something you do not know. But if young people depend too much on the Internet when they are studying, they think less. That leads to their poor ability to think. In addition, using the mass media is often a waste of time. On the one hand, it seems that using it is a good thing. However, young people tend to be distracted by many fun things on the mass media, and they often end up spending too much time on them.
How does the mass mediainternet affect the behavior of young people?
"The mass media" isn't a phrase used in English lingo. You could say "The internet" or "Social Media" if you're referring to that particularly.
The mass mediainternet has benefitted human beings for many years.
However, I believe that its bad effects on us, especially young people, are more significant than good ones.
But if young people depend too much on the Iinternet when they are studying, they think less.
That leads to their poor an inability to think for themselves.
In addition, using the mass mediainternet is often a waste of time.
On the one hand, it seems that using it iscan be a good thing.
However, young people tend to be distracted by many fun things on the mass mediainternet, and they often end up spending too much time on ithem.
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Overall totally understandable. Just word choice makes it sound foreign.
May 28, 2020
Thank you!!
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How does the mass media affect the behavior of young people? How does "The mass media" isn't a phrase used in English lingo. You could say "The internet" or "Social Media" if you're referring to that particularly. |
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The mass media has benefitted human beings for many years. The |
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However, I believe that its bad effects on us, especially young people are more significant than good ones. However, I believe that its bad effects on us, especially young people, are more significant than good ones. |
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It is true that it is very useful because you can look something up whenever you come across something you do not know. |
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But if young people depend too much on the Internet when they are studying, they think less. But if young people depend too much on the |
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That leads to their poor ability to think. That leads to |
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In addition, using the mass media is often a waste of time. In addition, using the |
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On the one hand, it seems that using it is a good thing. On the one hand, it seems that using |
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However, young people tend to be distracted by many fun things on the mass media, and they often end up spending too much time on them. However, young people tend to be distracted by many fun things on the |
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