Dec. 15, 2024
How does advertising affect the body image of men?
How does advertising affect the body image of men?
I'm positive that the advertising affects the body image of men. Especially on younger ones as they are the generation that more uses Internet. This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems very soon.
And frankly speaking, I don't really think people should get that much exposure to this. But in the end of the day, advertising is a business, and they have to promote their producs, whereas these products also sell solutions...
How does advertising affect the body image of men?
How does advertising affect the body image of men?
I'm positive that the advertising affects the body image of men.
Especially on younger onesmen as they are the generation that more uses the Internet more.
This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems very soonearly.
Soon = is about to happen.
Early = towards the beginning.
I think you mean to say that children start developing problems early (when they are still children).
But in the end of the day, advertising is a business, and they have to promote their products, whereas these products also sell solutions...
I don't understand "whereas these products also sell solutions..."
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Top level English. Good job!
Dec. 18, 2024
Thanks! Yeah, I don't know either what to wanted to say with the last phrase, I was a bit sleepy to be honest.
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How does advertising affect the body image of men?
I'm positive that the advertising affects the body image of men.
Especially on younger ones, as they are the generation that more uses the Internet the most.
This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems very soearly on.
And frankly speaking, I don't really think people should get that much exposure to this.
But inat the end of the day, advertising is a business, and they have to promote their products, whereasbut at the same time these products also sell solutions...
Dec. 18, 2024
Thanks! Yeah, I should capitalize more often.
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How does advertising affect the body image of men? How I would capitalize if this is a title, especially since it's repeated below uncapitalized. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How does advertising affect the body image of men? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm positive that the advertising affects the body image of men. I'm positive that This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Especially on younger ones as they are the generation that more uses Internet. Especially Especially on younger |
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This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems very soon. This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems This is the reason that these children can start showing body image problems very Soon = is about to happen. Early = towards the beginning. I think you mean to say that children start developing problems early (when they are still children). |
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And frankly speaking, I don't really think people should get that much exposure to this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But in the end of the day, advertising is a business, and they have to promote their producs, whereas these products also sell solutions... But But in the end of the day, advertising is a business, and they have to promote their products, whereas these products also sell solutions... I don't understand "whereas these products also sell solutions..." |
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