April 3, 2023
How do young people in your country get money?
I am not sure which ways young people currently use to get money, but I can talk in my case. When I was at the college, my parents gave me some money for going out with my friends. I didn't work then, so I had to ask then for money. It wasn't much, but it was enough to go to the cinema twice a month. At that time, I wasn't aware of the effort that it took to earn it. Therefore, I spend it too quickly; I didn't save any money as I didn't know the value of the money yet. Later on, I started working as a waiter in my father's restaurant. Thereby, I learned how much it cost to earn it and it was then when I started to save some money. Years went by and it took me ages to make up my mind on what spend that money, but I finally ended up spending the money I had been saving on my first car, an old second-hand car. Looking back, taking up saving money is one the best decisions I have ever made. Obviously, not everyone can't afford to save money, as there are people who are living in a day-to-day life.
How do young people in your country get money?
I am not sure whichat ways young people currently use to get money, but I can talk in my casespeak for myself.
When I was at thein college, my parents gave me some money for going out with my friends.
I didn't work then, so I had to ask thenm for money.
It wasn't much, but it was enough to go to the cinema twice a month.
At that time, I wasn't aware of the effort that it took to earn it.
Therefore, I spendt it too quickly; I didn't save any money as I didn't know the value of the money yet.
Spent is the past verb of spend
Later on, I started working as a waiter in my father's restaurant.
TFrom thereby, I learned/learnt how much it costed to earn it and it was then when I started to save some money.
Years went by and it took me ages to make up my mind on what to spend money on/on what to spend that money on, but I finally ended up spending the money I had been saving on my first car, an old second-hand car.
Looking back, taking up the habit of saving money is one of the best decisions I have ever made.
Obviously, not everyone can't afford to save money, as there are people who are living in a day-to-day life.
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Lovely
April 4, 2023
Many thanks for your corrections :D
I am not sure which ways young people currently use to get money, but I can talk in my case.
Using 'case' as object of verb implies court case or other specific usage. To use 'in my case' as in 'example specific to me' better to put it at front of sentence or phrase.
I didn't work then, so I had to ask then for money.
Therefore, I spendt it too quickly; I didn't save any money as I didn't know the value of the money yet.
April 4, 2023
Thanks!
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I am not sure which ways young people currently use to get money, but I can talk in my case. I am not sure which ways young people currently use to get money, but Using 'case' as object of verb implies court case or other specific usage. To use 'in my case' as in 'example specific to me' better to put it at front of sentence or phrase. I am not sure wh |
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When I was at the college, my parents gave me some money for going out with my friends. When I was |
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I didn't work then, so I had to ask then for money. I didn't work then, so I had to ask I didn't work then, so I had to ask the |
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It wasn't much, but it was enough to go to the cinema twice a month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, I wasn't aware of the effort that it took to earn it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, I spend it too quickly; I didn't save any money as I didn't know the value of the money yet. Therefore, I spen Therefore, I spen Spent is the past verb of spend |
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Later on, I started working as a waiter in my father's restaurant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thereby, I learned how much it cost to earn it and it was then when I started to save some money.
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Years went by and it took me ages to make up my mind on what spend that money, but I finally ended up spending the money I had been saving on my first car, an old second-hand car. Years went by and it took me ages to make up my mind on what to spend money on/on what to spend that money on, but I finally ended up spending the money I had been saving on my first car, an old second-hand car. |
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Looking back, taking up saving money is one the best decisions I have ever made. Looking back, taking up the habit of saving money is one of the best decisions I have ever made. |
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Obviously, not everyone can't afford to save money, as there are people who are living in a day-to-day life. Obviously, not everyone can |
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