April 6, 2022
That’s hard. In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves with others even though we don’t want to compete with people. Because there are some types of features we want to follow or want to be.
For example, you want to be a person like Mr. Trump because he is confident and motivated. It doesn‘t mean you are competing with him, you just adore him. You might be thinking yourself whether any features you don’t have but he has. You start finding the gap between you and him. And you want to learn some advantages of him. This is also a comparison. Then how to accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares with others unconsciously. And how to enjoy this process by yourself.
You need to do three steps for enjoying yourself. First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you should feel good and nice yourself. Secondly, you should be competitive, just be the good one if you can’t stop comparing. And Appreciate yourself whatever the ranking you are in your related circle. Finally, enjoy the following process for your hard work.
That’s all for my answer, Thank you for your reading.
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Then, how todo you accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares yourself with others unsubconsciously.?
And how tocould you enjoy this process by yourself.?
You need to do three steps for enjoying yourselfto make yourself feel better.
Maybe someone else can work "enjoying yourself" into this sentence but it just sounds wrong to me here.
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That’s all for my answer,. Thank you for your reading.
In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves with others even though we don’t want to compete with people.
Bbecause there are some types of features we want to follow or want to be.
Starting a sentence with "because" is usually discouraged!
It doesn‘t mean you are competing with him,, you just adore him.
You might be thinking to yourself whether anyat features you don’t have but he has.he has that you don't.
"Whether" is almost always used with "or" and "not".
And you want to learn somthe advantages of him.that he has.
"And" is discouraged from starting a sentence, your sentences are short you can keep them together!
Then how to accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares themselves with others unconsciously.
I'm not sure what "then how to accept yourself" means, you are either missing a verb or subject. Even can only be used when adding to the last phrase, in this case your previous phrase has no meaning.
You need to do three steps for enjoying yourselfto be happier.
First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you should feel good and nice yourself.
This is not what identity means.
And Aappreciate yourself whatever the ranking you are in your related circle.
That’s all for my answer, Tthank you for your reading.
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The flow of your writing was nice, it seems you followed a pretty good structure.
How do you stop comparing yourself to other people? |
That’s hard. |
In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves with others even though we don’t want to compete with people. In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves with others even though we don’t want to compete with people In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves |
Because there are some types of features we want to follow or want to be.
Starting a sentence with "because" is usually discouraged!
Went with my personal word choices, but there are many other options. |
For example, you want to be a person like Mr. Trump because he is confident and motivated. For example, you might want to be a person like Mr. Trump because he is confident and motivated. |
It doesn‘t mean you are competing with him, you just adore him. It doesn‘t mean you are competing with him
Unless you have actual feelings of love for a person, romantic or platonic, you usually don't use "adore". |
You might be thinking yourself whether any features you don’t have but he has. You might be thinking to yourself wh "Whether" is almost always used with "or" and "not". You might be thinking to yourself |
You start finding the gap between you and him. You start |
And you want to learn some advantages of him. And you want to learn "And" is discouraged from starting a sentence, your sentences are short you can keep them together!
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This is also a comparison. |
Then how to accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares with others unconsciously. Then how to accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares themselves with others unconsciously. I'm not sure what "then how to accept yourself" means, you are either missing a verb or subject. Even can only be used when adding to the last phrase, in this case your previous phrase has no meaning. Then, how |
And how to enjoy this process by yourself. And how |
You need to do three steps for enjoying yourself. You need to do three steps You need to do three steps Maybe someone else can work "enjoying yourself" into this sentence but it just sounds wrong to me here. |
First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you should feel good and nice yourself. First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you should feel good and nice yourself. This is not what identity means. First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you |
Secondly, you should be competitive, just be the good one if you can’t stop comparing. Secondly, you should be competitive "Competitive" probably isn't the right term to use here going by the context, but I'm not sure what you mean by it so I left it unchanged. |
And Appreciate yourself whatever the ranking you are in your related circle. And A |
Finally, enjoy the following process for your hard work. Finally, enjoy the I'm took a guess at what "following process" could mean and picked something that made the most sense. |
That’s all for my answer, Thank you for your reading. That’s all for my answer, That’s all for my answer |
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